VIPINS PUTHOORAN


Red-Carpet - Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

I.
Oh, dulcinea! lovest thou me,
As thou art the Princess-
In the vale of distress.
Desolate are thy sky
And thy palace sans me.
II.
May that velvet- ermine kiss,
My red throne in a sheer bliss!
O, be mine and my desire
And feel my love as fire!
Rule my heart's empire.
III.
Let me crown thee with a laurel
And deck thy neck with coral.
Let me embrace in thy lotus eyes
Let thy soul sail in my Seven Seas,
In my heart's shoreless seas!


Comments about Red-Carpet by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

  • Hans Vr (12/15/2011 6:26:00 PM)


    This one, Vipins, I truly consider to be a great piece of art.
    I think you strike an ace with this wonderful poetic expression of love.
    I fully agree with the superlatives used by the other commenters on this poem. Fantastic work, Vipins, keep writing.

    Hans
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  • (12/10/2011 9:52:00 AM)


    Friend I love the intelligence and dramatic technique you have marvelously displayed. I could see the blossom of another Romantic poet here. beautiful write. i must give 10+++ Rekhamandagere (Report) Reply

  • (12/9/2011 1:51:00 PM)


    You have a talent in poetry. Very well-written poem (Report) Reply

  • (12/9/2011 1:51:00 PM)


    You have a talent in poetry. Very well-written poem (Report) Reply

  • (12/9/2011 1:51:00 PM)


    You have a talent in poetry. Very well-written poem (Report) Reply

  • (12/8/2011 9:04:00 AM)


    To be in love, to desre. A great poem.
    Fantastic write.
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  • Jacqui Broad (12/5/2011 3:13:00 AM)


    You have a big heart my friend. Seems like there's no mountain high enough, no river wide enough to keep you away from your love. Poetry is the bridge... A beautiful poem! (Report) Reply

  • Sajna Kailas (12/3/2011 1:50:00 AM)


    wow! i am not at all talented to write comment on this great work! but loved its structure and style! beautiful lines! ! ! ! ! ! ! loved it! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • (12/3/2011 1:49:00 AM)


    nice (sorry don't have much to say) (Report) Reply

  • Louis Cecile (12/3/2011 1:36:00 AM)


    I quite enjoy the almost Victorian like use of language. The regal tone and picture it portrays is quite interesting. Good poem. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 2, 2011

Poem Edited: Friday, October 25, 2013


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