Relaxing World Poem by Varsha M

Relaxing World

Rating: 5.0


Joyous are the moments
Outing with loved ones
Right under the sun
Sitting on grass lawn
And cooking on coal fire
While children enjoying
Games with full pleasure.

Family time is always special
Relaxing from all the martial
Winning the heart's of children
Paving path to the true heaven
Embracing universe within self
Showering the seed of hope that help
Gathering smiling faces for life.

Picnic is a dynamic feel
A lasting imprint that heel.

AD18.06.2021
© Varsha Madhulika

Relaxing World
Friday, June 18, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: happiness,inner joy,pleasure,families
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
On the eve of World picnic day.18June 2021. Photo courtesy pinterest.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Wonderful poem! Like Asim ji says - a bundle of joy indeed. Top stars

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What a lovely family poem! Varsha so happy to see a happy, relaxing poem

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M Asim Nehal 19 June 2021

Bundle of joy. Time to relax and rejuvenate. I like picnic time. Nice one.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 19 June 2021

OF COURSE, I MEANT 5 STARS FULL. (my fingers has clicked the wrong buttons)

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Sylvia Frances Chan 19 June 2021

The oli painting added reminds me of the French Impressionists. Thank YOU.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 23 September 2021

this poem reminds me of simpler time

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Dr Dillip K Swain 23 September 2021

Just fabulous.........5 stars.

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Anjandev Roy 23 September 2021

A lasting imprint.....excellent....

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Kostas Lagos 20 June 2021

Winning the heart's of children/Paving path to the true heaven... Brilliant!

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 20 June 2021

family picnic and get together bring the divine united love each to others- superb beautiful poem according to the picture; just like it

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