Remember That Time Poem by Unwritten Soul

Remember That Time

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Remember that time...
When I teared, and you tried
To fool around to make me smile
Do you remember? Do you?

Remember that time...
When my blood turn blue, and you worried
Afraid my health worst, and you refuse me be alone
Do you remember? Do you?

Remember that time...
When someone criticize my childish poem
It was my first, maybe bad but you still loved it
Do you remember that one, do you?

Do you remember all time
All time we created moments together
Since the very first day I know you
I know, I never a good one, but you kind enough
Perhaps you dont remember all those
I know maybe you dont, but I still do

I do remember everything
Everything is permanently carved in my memory
Everywhere I will go, I wont go if I aint carry
Everytime my heart remind, my mind think of you
Perhaps you cant remember all
But I remember most of them if not all

For the kindness that each soul pour on me
For each good memory we created together
Could I be so forgetful?
My life is not made just for me
My life is bolder because beautiful people like you

Even it was long ago
Or in the future
If u ask
Will I remember all of those?
I do, I do... Remember all of you
Even if one day, life make you forget
My beautiful people.. My friends
I will never stop be thankful
For friends like you

I'll remember
I'll remember

Friday, May 31, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: friendship
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is a simple poem that i dedicated to my beautiful people, my friends here (poem hunter, including you) and everywhere that colour my life. God knows that each of means a lot to me. Thanks for always give kind words... You maybe dont know, that simple kindness really make me positive when i facing difficulties or when i have good days. God bless each of you my friends.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Muhammad Ali 31 May 2019

Thanks for these words. Humanity, that you will always play. Soft emotions of friendship, and thanks for the blessings you in a beautiful poem You do a difficult job, that is, you own friendship.. Means you own. Best wishes friend

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Unwritten Soul 01 June 2019

Thank u dear, thank you for being my friends all these years, i really appreciate your friendship and this will be ours forever. Take care always there...

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Lyn Paul 31 May 2019

You have written of something that keeps our mind and our heart strong. That beautiful connection of friendship and kindness that lifts us all. It makes the world a wonderful place and the world needs so much more. Thank you Soul.

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Sekharan Pookkat 04 July 2019

A golden grassy park carved the names on trees smiling against the visitors found thy name could it be cheerful for you to remember those days and moments! ! ! ! ! !

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Hans Vr 23 June 2019

Our Creator has given us the amazing power to remember all love and kindness. He has filled our hearts with love and each memory will encourage us to pour some of it on the people around us, creating more memories, more love and more kindness. We are in the middle of a chain reaction :) . Wonderful poem from a wonderful soul.

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Mj Lemon 01 June 2019

The closest ties are so bittersweet. This amazing verse captures this reality so very perfectly. Amazing, Soul!

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Crying Shame 31 May 2019

Tis not a text message uuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!

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Unwritten Soul 01 June 2019

Haha, surely i have to thank u for reminding me. It was my mistake to write a poem using phone... I do it very brief and didnt check before i submit. Shame on me.. Thank you :) have a nice day ahead

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Kelly Kurt 31 May 2019

Don't use u ever in a poem. It's not a text message.

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Unwritten Soul 01 June 2019

Thank you dear Kelly for your comment, you were right.. Its should be forbidden to use in this writing. Actually i construct this poem on phone and i forgot to change some.. Thank you for your constructive comment, i do appreciate it. Ill change it. Hope things are fine there

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