'Remember Those' Poem by Lyn Paul

'Remember Those'

Rating: 4.2


Remember Those
Walking their Darkest Path
They don't even know
You, are there
Their mind is so cloudy
They only see
Pain. Fear. Loss.
Let Us
Remember Those
Whatever the reason
For their pain
Just
Let them know
Someone is there
For Heartache
Is like Death
Clouds the mind
Excruciating pain
Never
Knowing it will heal
Whatever the reason
We must remember those
Hurting. Aching.
For it is seen
Right in their eyes
Let us give
The warmth of your heart
A sincere smile
For this
Will let them know
'That They'
Are not in this world
All alone
Let us
Remember Those






Copyright Reserved May 2014
LYN PAUL

Sunday, December 15, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: alone,depression,hope,memory,sadness
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Those All alone this Christmas Or any other Lonely day that they can no longer BARE
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shahzia Batool 15 December 2013

This is what virtue is, or the norms we inherit... what an irony that we don't celebrate religious events in a godly manner...whether it is Eid or Christmas or any other festival in religions...this should be the approach in practical way...

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Paul Brookes 16 December 2013

I liked the rhythm of this poem and its flow. The sentiments are beautifully expressed and at this time of year people remember those who are hurt or lonely or destitute. But rather like Scrooge after reform should we not keep Christmas in our hearts all the year. thanks for sharing 10/10 BB: O)

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Hazel Durham 16 December 2013

The pain of hurt, loss and fear which enters our lives at times, our need for a friendly smile, somebody to listen and help us to deal with it all. Beautiful write!

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Valerie Dohren 16 December 2013

Great sentiments expressed here Lyn, there are many lonely people who need to be remembered.

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Marvin Brato 10 January 2014

ENCOURAGING POEM, giving support to those people blinded with pain and hate whose hearts are filled with negativism is indeed a noble act!

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Geetha Jayakumar 25 December 2013

An inspiring write from your kind heart. Really a few kind words or a friendly smile can do much. Beautiful poem. Loved reading it.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 22 December 2013

A poem exhorting compassion so nicely pennd. D miserable feel worst in festiv occasions dats why in our Eid its a must to give Eidulfitri charity.

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Rubab Atwal 21 December 2013

beautifully expressed.........loved it

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Kanav Justa 18 December 2013

, , , the poem gives us a reflection of your kind heart, , , , nice write, ,

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