Rising Sun Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Rising Sun

Rating: 5.0


In the winter morning
Diamond fogs play on spiky grasses.
The rising sun is my friend then.

Not pigeons but crows flying on this town
In winter, the feathers are crystal black.
Then cawing is my morning song.

Town streets of dawn are not alone.
Female garments workers are busy.
Like the butterflies after blooming fresh flowers

My country is my pride for the hard workers.
This world is my heaven for welfare inventions.
The winter helps me to see the rising sun of life.


-20.12.2020 Chattogram

Sunday, December 20, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: hardship,praise,welfare ,works
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 22 December 2020

Wow! A wonderful poem dear, dear Mahtab! May the rising sun always give you the brilliance of mind and fulfillment of all your dreams.with warmest wishes.

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Kesav Easwaran 20 December 2020

Nice write on an East Winter morning painted with good patriotic feelings.5 stars

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Sandra Feldman 20 December 2020

Truly beautiful and deeply touching. Long lasting stanzas and verses. All described with such delicacy and good taste. A poem to really enjoy and not let it go to waste. Splendid and full of grace.

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Varsha M 20 December 2020

Whatever happen life never stops it just goes on and on till breath goes on...rising sun will always shine calling us to marvels remembered for ages.

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