Revolution Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Revolution

Rating: 5.0


Struggling for a new system
Struggling for legal rights
Struggling for wining
An instance of revolving rules

To overthrow forcibly
the govt. or social old order,
A fundamental sudden change
in political power relatively

To work for true fundamental rights,
To work for good life through fights
Without blood shedding, destructing
Without defeating, hurting, killing

It's conflict, battle, rebellion
It's not treachery motion
It's empathy, equality, victory
It's ubiquitous unity
It's revolution against any oppression
It's humanitarian lotion


©Mahtab Bangalee
Chattogram
19/12/2022

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 20 December 2022

I appreciate the core of this poem. Revolutionary poets always suffer but they embrace the idea: If to die, don't die begging, If to die don't die humiliating yourself like the death of an ignored dog rotting the street..(cont.)

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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 December 2022

Prefer the only way to lead a true human life for a nobel cause, for the cause of establishing healthy socicity for the sake of humanity.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 December 2022

If to die, die with honour, raising your head high in taking revolutionary upsurges of the masses...(cont)

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Anjandev Roy 21 December 2022

Great write with prolific message.....thank u..

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Adeeb Alfateh 21 December 2022

It's revolution against any oppression It's humanitarian lotion ~ unique definition of revolution

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Mac Che 21 December 2022

last stanza is not bad as a definition of revolution

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Mac Che 21 December 2022

revolution is something else what we think as a panorama of war/battle/combat or fight. It's I thinks one kind of intense love for humanity.

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Ayatullah Nurjati 20 December 2022

Sometimes the system and the development of the era leave the existing idealism. In the name of revolution, everything seems legitimate, sometimes you have to sacrifice the human side, that is the pragmatism of change

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