Rowing Boat Poem by Varsha M

Rowing Boat

Rating: 5.0


Nothing just a crafted wood
I sail across the slippery press
Sometimes tilting this side
Sometimes tilting that side
But the good news is
I always propel ahead
Pushing the waters back
Only because
You are my nest
And I'm the best
Sailing right across
On the slippery press.

Wednesday, July 22, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: boat,forward
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
There is always a positive side so keep looking for positivity in every thing.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aarzoo Mehek 22 July 2020

Keep moving and keep rowing until you reach the shore. Nice and positive poem.

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Rajnish Manga 22 July 2020

Don't give up unless and until you reach your destination. This should be the guiding principle. Thank you so much.

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Sharad Bhatia 22 July 2020

It's a lovely feeling for " positiveness" . Thankyou for sharing M'am. Rated 10+

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Bernard F. Asuncion 22 July 2020

A well inked poem. Simply marvelous......10+++

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 12 October 2020

How we perceive our life and how deal with it sets our goal. The more positive we are the more positive vibrations attract us.It is like a magnetic field. So move on with confidence and sincerity. God will guide the virtuous people through the right path. Varsha, so good to see you writing so many poems. God bless you. Thank you so much for reading my poems and your lovely comments too

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 04 October 2020

A beautifully imagined verse, with romance and serenity.

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Edward Kofi Louis 26 July 2020

Nest of love! ! Best with the truth! And to press on! ! ! ! With the steps of peace. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 23 July 2020

A brilliant poem with a precise message! Thanks for sharing......10+++++

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Mahtab Bangalee 22 July 2020

The wood shifted shape as the carrier comfortably everywhere over the water to the goal of fair heart where beloved plays lyre

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