<≪≪≪rubious Pearls≫≫≫≫ Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

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The love throbbed deep in his thoughtful mind,
Swung like a pomegranate fruit,
All the time by a strange wind
Of his own heart's drought.
As the lornsome man of his world;
Moved heavan and earth as long as he could,
To become her lovable gardener.
But the dreamy, drowsy-wanderer
With a face that was almost pale,
With a heart that was always in sail
Through his seas of dreams
In never ending shores
Always roamed around her vale,
To pluck the rubious pearls,
Of her heart with his dried lips
Because her heart was a pomegranate fruit.

Sunday, November 27, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jyothsnaphanija Bolla 28 November 2011

no words. how do you get such powerful inspirations, and delicate language? its really one of the best poem of yours.

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Jacqui Broad 29 November 2011

You're a great poet! The contrast so sharp. Perhaps you should taste the fruit and make your lips less dry. Vipins, this is truly beautiful!

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Crimson Love 30 November 2011

Phenomenal poem, every line was simply brilliant! fantastic write! :)

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Buddy Bee Anthony 03 December 2011

I like the phrase rubious pearls. It almost sounds like her sacred heart. Your lips are dried because you thirst for her, yes? Your descriptive analysis of her as a pomemgranate signifies a rich lush, fruit with lots of pearly seeds inside Love that reference as well. Did you intend a double meaning with vale and veil? Both spellings work in this instance. It was interesting how when she walked by she created a wind, a stirring his your mind. This is an excellent poem,

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Buddy Bee Anthony 03 December 2011

I like the phrase rubious pearls. It almost sounds like her sacred heart. Your lips are dried because you thirst for her, yes? Your descriptive analysis of her as a pomemgranate signifies a rich lush, fruit with lots of pearly seeds inside Love that reference as well. Did you intend a double meaning with vale and veil? Both spellings work in this instance. It was interesting how when she walked by she created a wind, a stirring his your mind. This is an excellent poem,

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Geetha Jayakumar 30 August 2013

Beautiful poem....Lovely combination of pomegranate that look alike rubious pearls.....Loved reading it.

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Hazel Durham 17 November 2012

Such an evocative piece with great lines! !

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Dave Walker 14 April 2012

A beautiful poem my friend, a great write.

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Dead Rose 09 January 2012

Pomegranate fruit is my favourite.... Fantastic poem............10****** Rose,

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Terence George Craddock 01 January 2012

To see and behold a beautiful mind, Like a pomegranate fruit in another; how could we not attempt to pluck the rubious pearls, Of her heart with my dried lips? . How could we not attempt to taste mind vision?

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