<≪≪≪rubious Pearls≫≫≫≫ Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

<≪≪≪rubious Pearls≫≫≫≫

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The love throbbed deep in his thoughtful mind,
Swung like a pomegranate fruit,
All the time by a strange wind
Of his own heart's drought.
As the lornsome man of his world;
Moved heavan and earth as long as he could,
To become her lovable gardener.
But the dreamy, drowsy-wanderer
With a face that was almost pale,
With a heart that was always in sail
Through his seas of dreams
In never ending shores
Always roamed around her vale,
To pluck the rubious pearls,
Of her heart with his dried lips
Because her heart was a pomegranate fruit.

Sunday, November 27, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Saranyan Saranyan 01 January 2012

Nice poem, rubious pearls...

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Jonny Brackney 20 December 2011

Scotty, 'lips' would technically be the end of the sentence 'Can I pluck the rubious pearls of her heart with my dried lips? ' Question marks go at the end of the sentence. Which explains why the question mark is after lips and not pearls. Anyways, a decent poesy!

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Scotty Dogg 09 December 2011

I like it! 'dried lips' is good. Much imagery.Much good poem! Why am I writing like Tarzan? Don't know. Watch your grammer, though. Question mark after lips, not pearls (?) Nice one Vipins. Scott.

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Jyotsana Chiruvolu 09 December 2011

Hi.. Out of all the 4 new poems, most liked poem by me is this! ! ! ! Sounds Gr8 and Phenomenal....

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Richard McClellan 05 December 2011

Very nice romantic poem... Many have wanted to pluck! lol

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Geetha Jayakumar 30 August 2013

Beautiful poem....Lovely combination of pomegranate that look alike rubious pearls.....Loved reading it.

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Hazel Durham 17 November 2012

Such an evocative piece with great lines! !

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Dave Walker 14 April 2012

A beautiful poem my friend, a great write.

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Dead Rose 09 January 2012

Pomegranate fruit is my favourite.... Fantastic poem............10****** Rose,

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Terence George Craddock 01 January 2012

To see and behold a beautiful mind, Like a pomegranate fruit in another; how could we not attempt to pluck the rubious pearls, Of her heart with my dried lips? . How could we not attempt to taste mind vision?

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