s.zaynab kamoonpuri

Port Hart corte (place of birth)
s.zaynab kamoonpuri
Port Hart corte (place of birth)
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Scenery Medley Contrasts!

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Mushrooms and meadows
Sunshine and shadows

Gentle ripples on the calm river
Foaming rapids in white water

The jungle echoes in the semi-darkness
while daylight creepy-crawlies clear the mess.

Peasants toiling and pheasants scratching
as I spy a cricket somersaulting
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Tuesday, November 20, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: Art
Kumarmani Mahakul 28 October 2019
Wonderful imagery and imaginary. You have so brilliantly composed this poem taking different contrasted beings and things. Haunting expression. I appreciate your art. The concluding two lines say much about nature's panoramic and God's picturesque. Thank you dear madam, full vote for this poem.
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Victoria Donnelly 16 April 2013
Wonderfully crafted...a spectrum of contrasts packed with evocative imagery.
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Lasoaphia Quxazs 09 December 2012
Very well written, comes so easily. You are a wonderful writer.
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Stevie Taite 06 December 2012
This poem is full of interesting comparisons and well described, unique little observations! Cute, funny and keeps you reading!
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Ruth Walters 29 November 2012
an easy read, very catchy and descriptive
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Musfiq Us Shaleheen 28 November 2012
extreme imagery with nice wording and twisted also rhythmic....
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Lyn Paul 28 November 2012
What beautiful words. It really is a lovely poem
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Gordon Tseng 28 November 2012
Page words go popping while poems go hopping and readers go shopping Insights have formed a V-line The feelings too are divine as rhythms swarm in wine. Screen seizes virtual lovers too Thus they miss out on the window's song for the window, it does not sing on cue since the wind anytime may it sing to woo.
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Tunji Ibrahim 27 November 2012
Your alliterative, stylistic and rhymic techniques and adorable imagery copiously pinpoint the authenticity of the poem.
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Danny Draper 27 November 2012
A fine assemblage of images and contrasting rhymes and rhythms that are the essence of the flow and contrasts at the joy and heart of Nature.
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