s.zaynab kamoonpuri

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Salutes To The Sweet Tooth Ah? - Poem by s.zaynab kamoonpuri

Nutritionist, diabetes or
dietician
All to be unheeded in my
sweet tooth's opinion.

For how can I abandon
That chocolate canyon?

And same goes for yummy
chocolate fudge
Eh to a trifle could I bear
any grudge?

Ah treacle or caramel pudding
And apple crumble needs no
bidding

The craving wishes to devour
the dessert
Few would desert a tasty jam
tart!

Not forgetting swiss rolls and
cup cakes
and whatever other
sweetmeats the baker bakes.

Ah custards, ice-creams,
muffins and jellies
the only deterrent perhaps, the
fear of rounded bellies

Only if the dietician would
recommend instead
to cut down on leafy grassy
veggie salad

For if there was for it a polling
booth
I'd vote in favour of my sweet
tooth!

Topic(s) of this poem: Art


Poet's Notes about The Poem

As a North Indian lady I should mention Indian desserts such as Rasgullah, Rasmalai, Gulab jamuns, Sevaéiñ, and jalebi.

Comments about Salutes To The Sweet Tooth Ah? by s.zaynab kamoonpuri

  • Rajnish Manga (1/19/2015 10:55:00 AM)

    Even the most ardent sweet meat lovers would not be able to put across the subject so effectively as has been done by this wonderful poem. I love the way you have done it. Happy sweet tooth. (Report)Reply

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  • Anil Kumar Panda (1/18/2015 8:20:00 AM)

    a no no for diabetic.nice drop. (Report)Reply

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  • (1/15/2015 9:02:00 PM)

    Dangerous because you express your love of sweets so well that people will be persuaded to eat more and will grow fat, blow up like dynamite (Report)Reply

    S.zaynab Kamoonpuri(1/16/2015 9:44:00 AM)

    Ohho hee hee, thanx for the clarification since im such a timid cat u know. Regards poet.

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  • (1/4/2015 6:11:00 PM)

    you're dangerous SzK. They're the ingredients of TNT (Report)Reply

    S.zaynab Kamoonpuri(1/15/2015 10:03:00 AM)

    Im sory i totalym dint get what u meant by saying that im dangerous or the sweet tooth poem has ingredients of TNT. What on earth did u mean by that? Whats tnt? Cheers.

    S.zaynab Kamoonpuri(1/15/2015 10:02:00 AM)

    Im sory i totalym dint get what u meant by saying that im dangerous or the sweet tooth poem has ingredients of TNT. What on earth did u mean by that? Whats tnt? Cheers.

    S.zaynab Kamoonpuri(1/15/2015 10:01:00 AM)

    Im sory i totalym dint get what u meant by saying that im dangerous or the sweet tooth poem has ingredients of TNT. What on earth did u mean by that? Whats tnt? Cheers.

    S.zaynab Kamoonpuri(1/15/2015 10:00:00 AM)

    Im sory i totaly dint get what u meant by saying that im dangerous or the sweet tooth poem has ingredients of TNT. What on earth did u mean by that? What is Tnt? Cheers.

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  • Phillip Joshua Jimenez (12/27/2014 10:15:00 AM)

    My big brother and a lady friend will both love this poem ^_^ (Report)Reply

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  • Nasarudheen Parameswaran (12/25/2014 3:47:00 AM)

    A fine personal poem with universal appeal. (Report)Reply

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  • (12/16/2014 4:57:00 PM)

    Oh my, you and I think alike in this respect. The sweet treats are so wonderful. Life is too short to deprive ourselves of these tasty morsels. But that's okay, as long as we eat them in moderation (but that's where the problem lies, right?) Delightful poem. (Report)Reply

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  • Lyn Paul (12/16/2014 6:55:00 AM)

    Ah! I am with you. Thank you for your words. We all need some spice in our lifes.... But not as much as we need the Sugar! Just love the picture. (Report)Reply

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  • Mihaela Pirjol (12/15/2014 3:34:00 PM)

    A delightful sweet-poem you composed here! Really delicious! (Report)Reply

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  • (12/15/2014 12:12:00 AM)

    Ha Ha Ha Ha! Totally loved this poem! I too choose the sweet tooth over leafy, grassy veggie salad! Really enjoyable poem, you made my mind water for sweets now! Thank you for sharing this poem! Also, thank you very much for your comment on my poem Nature Of A Mind. I appreciate it very much! Keep writing, I enjoy your poetry. RoseAnn (Report)Reply

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  • Md Elias Uddin (12/14/2014 3:18:00 AM)

    Nutritionist, diabetes or
    dietician
    All to be unheeded in my
    sweet tooth's opinion.

    jellies.....bellies....and voting for 'my sweet tooth'.......all's interesting!
    A funny poem, yet bringing in a lot on focus! Liked!
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, December 13, 2014

Poem Edited: Thursday, December 18, 2014


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