Valerie Dohren

Gold Star - 6,766 Points (13 January 1947 / Southport)

See How The Stars Are Shining Bright - Poem by Valerie Dohren

(An Ode for Christmas)

There’s a beauty in the sky tonight
See how the stars are shining bright
See how the moon lights up the sky
Shimmering softly there up high.

And a fragrance drifting through the air
Intoxicating, everywhere,
Breaths of sweet perfume all around
Rising up heav’nward from the ground.

There’s a song of tender love divine
A message meant for the world, a sign,
Joyfully whisp’ring through the night
Soft as a Dove in wing’ed flight.

With a heartbeat sounding from afar
A heart beating from some distant star
Pounding, resounding, in my mind
Heralding hope for all mankind.

Oh hail to this wonder so revealed
This splendour that be no more concealed
There’s a beauty in the sky tonight
See how the stars are shining bright …

See how the stars are shining bright.

Comments about See How The Stars Are Shining Bright by Valerie Dohren

  • Unwritten Soul (1/6/2014 9:56:00 AM)

    I sighed on the moon as it doest show me the bright face today...then i read your poem, its like giving me a warm blanket, warm coffee while looking to the cold sky tonight :) _Soul (Report) Reply

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  • Valsa George (12/11/2013 7:06:00 AM)

    There’s a beauty in the sky tonight
    See how the stars are shining bright

    Beautiful refrain! ! I see it myself! Beautiful poem ! ! Let this Christmas bring a lot of peace and consolation into your life, Val! Love the write and a 10
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  • (12/9/2013 10:11:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem, valerie Dohren. The way you describe the sky, air, stars and the hearts is excellent..nice to read and enjoy.. (Report) Reply

  • Dinesh Nair (12/9/2013 8:01:00 AM)

    May this Xmas bring in much-needed solace to humanity in general and lots of cheer into the life of Valerie.. (Report) Reply

  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (12/8/2013 11:00:00 PM)

    Beauty of the sky in winter is nicely described. It is exciting time for all as Christmas approaches. Hope and expectation is in the air. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Paul Brookes (12/8/2013 5:38:00 PM)

    A Christmas ode indeed such serenity and calm Oh hail this poem and behold see how brightly it shines, lovely poem, thanks for sharing 10/10 BB: O) (Report) Reply

  • (12/8/2013 3:08:00 PM)

    The stars and the moon always give off a magical light in the darkness,
    a great poem.
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  • (12/7/2013 5:29:00 PM)

    Heralding hope for all mankind. Yes Christmas has always been a time for hope and peace. Beautifully written Valerie. (Report) Reply

  • Hazel Durham (12/7/2013 4:08:00 PM)

    The serenity and beauty of this scene in the night sky brought to life with words wrapped in hope, love and peace to awaken us to this very special time of the year! (Report) Reply

  • (12/7/2013 4:04:00 PM)

    I saw and felt them shining bright,
    You're writing always a delight!
    The music, images, your verse
    They are like velvet, soft and terse
    Verses that life cannot reverse.

    Your Poetry, always, beautiful and reaching fro those stars
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  • Dee Corpolongo (12/7/2013 1:39:00 PM)

    Such a beautiful poem, I could only wish I could write like you. With such style and such grace,
    and descriptions that amaze. You add the beauty in the holidays with your words. {{{hugs}}}
    and many blessings always.
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, December 7, 2013

Poem Edited: Saturday, December 7, 2013

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