Shaded Avenues Poem by Valerie Dohren

Shaded Avenues

Rating: 4.9


Down shaded avenues I wander
'Midst the falling Autumn leaves -
In solitude to dream and ponder
On all which the world now grieves.

Sweet melodies have softly faded
With the dying of the sun -
The paths of joy and love abraded,
All things lost and all things done.

With tranquil mind and silent yearning
For a time when peace shall be -
So armed with love and gracious learning,
Shall my heart and soul be free.

Thus on to distant realms I travel,
Searching for a future time
When every dream shall then unravel -
Splendid, wonderful, sublime.

Ah, be then calm my soul forever,
No more tossed, torn, nor defiled -
All life's vicissitudes to sever,
Seeking lands yet fair and mild.

Oh, for a land where sunshine lingers,
Oh, for a land of sweet repose
Where every care slips through my fingers -
Peacefully ling'ring at the close...

Ah, peacefully ling'ring at the close.

Monday, July 22, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: Poetry
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Feldman 23 July 2013

Felt a ever encompassing need for inner peace and reaching a fairy land? The dream land of the poet so hard to find but hope lives forever in this poet's heart. The reader travels with you and you transmit your feelings and thoughts in a framework of beautiful lace and poetic color as is your style.

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Dave Walker 23 July 2013

A beautiful and wonderful flowing poem. So relaxing to read. Peace and sweet dreams is what we all search for. A very very beautiful poem.

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Lucifera Santez 22 July 2013

valerie, its a wonder. oh for the land where sunshine lingers, oh for the land of sweet repose. my favorite lines....... please try to read my new poem song of thorn bird. :)

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Shahzia Batool 23 July 2013

A graphic scene... you put your readers into it by the imaginative powers... the longing is impressive: Oh, for a land where sunshine lingers, Oh, for a land of sweet repose Where every care slips through my fingers - Peacefully ling’ring at the close... Ah, peacefully ling’ring at the close.

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Neela Nath Das 22 July 2013

Beautiful Val.I dream of writing poem like this.

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Mary Forrester 01 September 2013

Such a beautiful poem Valerie, I have read this poem several times, it draws me in every time.

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Kevin Patrick 01 August 2013

This shaded avenue is like a dream of opal coming to life. Thank you for taking me there

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Lyn Paul 31 July 2013

Such a pure peaceful write with flowing words. You are respected so beautifully, can just feel it in the comments.

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Godfrey Morris 28 July 2013

Beautiful write, inspiring.

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G.R. Gaus 25 July 2013

You have described my vision of the afterlife, freedom from all that we have created upon ourselves in this mortal plane. Well written in verse and rhyme as always.....

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