I see terror round
The nostrils of wars flare wide
Pain stabs my weak heart
War is like the furious dragon. You pictured it so realistically.
The nostrils of wars flare...that's a forbidding image, showing rightfully the horror of wars. Pain stabs my weak heart...true, as a result of wars, we get nothing but pain. Well penned.
Great imagery with the terror of war beautifully portrayed and the fear that storms with devastating consequences!
I see terror round The nostrils of wars flare wide Pain stabs my weak heart......terror...war...heart are used so astutely. Nice haiku.
I see terror round The nostrils of wars flare wide Pain stabs my weak heart When can we stay away from war?
Terror weakens any good heart. A haiku with a nice message inside 10+
The nostrils of wars flare wide.. very fine expressions.. tony
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wickedness will never bring us peace. Thanks for sharing.