Senryu- Wars Poem by Valsa George

Senryu- Wars

Rating: 5.0


I see terror round
The nostrils of wars flare wide
Pain stabs my weak heart

Wednesday, January 27, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: haiku
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 28 January 2016

Wickedness will never bring us peace. Thanks for sharing.

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Kelly Kurt 28 January 2016

A horror we have seen for too long

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 28 January 2016

War is like the furious dragon. You pictured it so realistically.

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Nosheen Irfan 01 February 2016

The nostrils of wars flare...that's a forbidding image, showing rightfully the horror of wars. Pain stabs my weak heart...true, as a result of wars, we get nothing but pain. Well penned.

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Hazel Durham 07 February 2016

Great imagery with the terror of war beautifully portrayed and the fear that storms with devastating consequences!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 October 2020

I see terror round The nostrils of wars flare wide Pain stabs my weak heart......terror...war...heart are used so astutely. Nice haiku.

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Luo Zhihai 28 August 2020

I see terror round The nostrils of wars flare wide Pain stabs my weak heart When can we stay away from war?

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Kesav Easwaran 20 March 2020

Terror weakens any good heart. A haiku with a nice message inside 10+

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Dr Antony Theodore 06 August 2019

The nostrils of wars flare wide.. very fine expressions.. tony

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Akhtar Jawad 27 October 2017

A thiughtprovoking haiku, may God bless this earth!

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