Valsa George

Senryu- Wars - Poem by Valsa George

I see terror round
The nostrils of wars flare wide
Pain stabs my weak heart

Topic(s) of this poem: haiku

Comments about Senryu- Wars by Valsa George

  • Jez Brul (4/2/2018 10:36:00 AM)

    Such a powerful senryu... The nostrils of war... so original! to my poem list..10+++++ (Report) Reply

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  • Jez Brul (4/2/2018 10:12:00 AM)

    Such powerful senryu...Nostrils of original! ! ! I so love my poem list.10+++++ (Report) Reply

  • Akhtar Jawad (10/27/2017 12:42:00 AM)

    A thiughtprovoking haiku, may God bless this earth! (Report) Reply

  • (1/26/2017 1:01:00 PM)

    Magnificent imagery, Valsa. Just amazing. (Report) Reply

  • Souren Mondal (2/9/2016 9:38:00 AM)

    Maybe it is only those who are 'weak hearted' and cowards that instigate wars, it is the brave who stand up for peace. A beautiful haiku Valsa ma'am. Under the circumstances we are living under, it is a valuable poem. Thank you for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Hazel Durham (2/7/2016 10:50:00 AM)

    Great imagery with the terror of war beautifully portrayed and the fear that storms with devastating consequences! (Report) Reply

  • Nosheen Irfan (2/1/2016 2:52:00 AM)

    The nostrils of wars flare...that's a forbidding image, showing rightfully the horror of wars. Pain stabs my weak heart...true, as a result of wars, we get nothing but pain. Well penned. (Report) Reply

  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (1/28/2016 4:48:00 PM)

    War is like the furious dragon. You pictured it so realistically. (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (1/28/2016 1:42:00 AM)

    A horror we have seen for too long (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (1/28/2016 1:18:00 AM)

    Wickedness will never bring us peace. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, January 27, 2016

Poem Edited: Thursday, January 28, 2016

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