Senryu 13 (Politician) Poem by Savita Tyagi

Senryu 13 (Politician)

Rating: 5.0


For a shrewd politico
Words don't create a promise
Just after election trash!

Saturday, February 6, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: politics
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ratnakar Mandlik 06 February 2016

Realistic and most appropriate haiku penned beautifully and at right time. Thanks for sharing.10 points. May I invite you to read my poem, A burlesque on politicians that also project similar expressions.

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Aarzoo Mehek 06 February 2016

Bitter truth.... but that's how they work misleading innocent souls with false promises.10

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Spock The Vegan 10 February 2016

Unfortunately correct in many cases. Still hoping for an honest one.

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Akhtar Jawad 19 February 2016

Still we vote such cheaters, perhaps we don't have any alternate. A nice Haiku.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 14 February 2016

Nice haiku as elections are heating up.

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Savita Tyagi 13 February 2016

Thanks Valsa for the title suggestion. Next time will try to be more accurate in following rules. So much to learn!

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Valsa George 13 February 2016

The politicians dole out rosy promises, but once the election is over, these chameleons will show their true colours! A great haiku.... (Senryu)

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Abhilasha Bhatt 12 February 2016

True....nice sharing....thank you :)

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