Like grilled piece of meat
In hot fires of discontent
I am badly burnt
Do not ever raise the hot fire of discontent, consequences are undesirable. Beautifully described with economy of words.
discontent causes much duress just be happy with what we're blessed thanks Valsa
disaconent......... badly burnt......... life experiences... is there any one who is not burnt.....? ? love this poem dear Valsa...... you are one of the best poets here in poemhunter. thnk you dev.
No other better way than yours to express the emotion here depicted is there ...kudos Valsa
fires of discontent// awesome phrase, it expresses many things
hot fires of discontent....... naturally it burns., ., ., very fine and you express it so well and the meaning is deep. thank u dear professor.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Too close to the fire brings consequences