Senryu- Discontent Poem by Valsa George

Senryu- Discontent

Rating: 5.0


Like grilled piece of meat
In hot fires of discontent
I am badly burnt

Sunday, March 20, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: senryu
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 20 March 2016

Too close to the fire brings consequences

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Nosheen Irfan 21 March 2016

Wonderful way to describe discontent. A fine ink.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 23 March 2016

Do not ever raise the hot fire of discontent, consequences are undesirable. Beautifully described with economy of words.

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Loke Kok Yee 29 March 2016

discontent causes much duress just be happy with what we're blessed thanks Valsa

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Dev Anand 09 April 2016

disaconent......... badly burnt......... life experiences... is there any one who is not burnt.....? ? love this poem dear Valsa...... you are one of the best poets here in poemhunter. thnk you dev.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 07 November 2022

Brilliant one... just wonderful

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Indira Renganathan 29 March 2020

No other better way than yours to express the emotion here depicted is there ...kudos Valsa

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Kesav Easwaran 23 March 2020

Well defined. Demonic dance indeed 10+

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Mahtab Bangalee 03 February 2019

fires of discontent// awesome phrase, it expresses many things

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Dr Antony Theodore 01 December 2018

hot fires of discontent....... naturally it burns., ., ., very fine and you express it so well and the meaning is deep. thank u dear professor.

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