Senryu - Limerick Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - Limerick

Rating: 5.0


spider spinning web
a Young girl combing her hair
a great trap workout

Wednesday, August 19, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: life,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
T Rajan Evol 19 August 2020

H ah ah a great trap in making....wonderful thinking.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 August 2020

You have brilliantly noticed the spinning of spider and combing of hair of a girl. This perceptional Limeric Senryu gives unlimited fum and expresses humor. This is a very brilliant poem...10

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Aarzoo Mehek 19 August 2020

Love itself is a trap for life. A beautiful trap indeed.10++

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Bernard F. Asuncion 21 August 2020

A well composed piece. Excellently crafted.....10++

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Sylvia Frances Chan 20 August 2020

Indeed a great trap workout! Lovely Senryu, Asim Sir! A 10++++ full score!

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Tom Allport 20 August 2020

A well written and observed write.....penned well

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Zuzu Mutairi 19 August 2020

Nice comparison. Spider's web compared to combining of hairs.

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Edward Kofi Louis 19 August 2020

Workout! ! Facing the muse of life! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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