My mind, a reeling top
Thoughts, coagulated mass
Indivisible!
You have given a solid form to the thoughts that gather in the mind.
My mind, coagulated mass, Love, melting it in aroma, felt but not seen!
Another great imagery in this wonderful senryu. Essence compressed perfectly!
Brilliant write in its simplicity. This poem resonates for me.10
A lovely Haiku! I like the way you have tried to express your poetic mind! Loved reading it!
Wonderful imaginary. Concise but meaningful. Thanks for sharing.
Thoughts of life; with the muse of nature. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
You can read my mind :) This is exactly how I'am feeling and you voiced it.... Nothing less then 10 for peeping into my mind :)