Senryu- With Friends Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu- With Friends

Rating: 5.0


early morning sun
after chilling winter night
stroll and talk with friends

near old pond on tree
sparrows sitting together
fog slowly lifting

Thursday, February 10, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: nature love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unnikrishnan E S 10 February 2022

After a chilling winter night, dawn lights up the world and the nocturnal fog slowly lifts… marvellous

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 12 February 2022

Asim ji, beautiful nature and beautiful friends. How fascinating.........10

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Dr Dillip K Swain 11 February 2022

Really interesting! Extremely well composed in its compactness!

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Chinedu Dike 11 February 2022

An interesting piece with vivid imagery....

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David Wood 11 February 2022

You paint a lovely picture.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 11 February 2022

I really loved the first two lines Overall I thought it was beautiful

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