early morning sun
after chilling winter night
stroll and talk with friends
near old pond on tree
sparrows sitting together
fog slowly lifting
Asim ji, beautiful nature and beautiful friends. How fascinating.........10
Really interesting! Extremely well composed in its compactness!
I really loved the first two lines Overall I thought it was beautiful
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
After a chilling winter night, dawn lights up the world and the nocturnal fog slowly lifts… marvellous