Sequoia Poem by yoonoos peerbocus

Sequoia

Rating: 4.9


Massive your roots
sunk underground
where all at last anchor
to re-berth with their ancestors; trunk
gigantic, millennia-tested, leaves myriad
shade all underneath, space-ward heads-

a monument in plant, no skyscraper
could ever reach your evolutionary
peak or any kingdom your height, merged
in the unseen.Awe-struck is my soul
as I sense my essence
telepathically

immortal as yours
clad in form stand among transitory
things of time, is governed
by the same force that maintains
and determines your survival
and extinction.

Friday, August 28, 2020
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kostas Lagos 29 August 2020

Beautiful poem Yoonoos! Happy to read a poem of yours once again!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 11 April 2023

You are absolutely right, dear Kostas.

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Leeann Azzopardi 29 August 2020

I would love to come to yr country and see this. It seems that you caught the essence of the trees Bravo!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 17 November 2022

the poet resides in Mauritius, dear LeeAnn, the tree you can find in most national parks in the USA, I have seen them there, huge, very huge and most huge, all are amazing wonders of nature, very old, very huge and stillstanding on the ground, in the earth to LIVE

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Mallika Achuthan Menon 29 August 2020

A good philosophical approach.. Rich poetry..10/10

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Nastasimir Franovic 30 May 2023

The power of nature. The trees which witness the times pass by. The roots, our ties to our ancestors. Thank you for a wonderful poem!

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Poetic Sky 29 May 2023

Lovely poem. Nicely written.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 11 April 2023

CONGRATULATIONS, DEAR YOONOSS, your poem is ranked as number 15, you are quite a very long time on this Best Member Poems Status, since you have not submitted a new poem anymore. But my CONGRATS are sincere, right from my heart.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 11 November 2022

A great poem dear poet. Loved it. Top score

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Martin Greyford 23 June 2022

it keeps me thinking how can such tall big giant trees ever exist in my era? i realise God wanted me to see where they are getting of skycrapers

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