Shades Of Gray Poem by Smoky Hoss

Shades Of Gray

Rating: 5.0


Sometimes I wish I was Mother Teresa, sometimes
Jesse James.
But always wondering,
would I be either one, for love or for fame?
What's that say about me?
Am I sinner or saint?
Bound or free?
Both, I believe.
The divide is narrow
between a want and a need.
It's always hard to say
the color of the soul
when wrapped in so many shades of gray.
In every yesterday, today and tomorrow,
the fleeting laughter moves on
turning our own fragile joy into such precarious sorrow.
What if tomorrow never comes?
What then shall
by heaven and earth be done?
We all waste too much time talking
to those who care not for what we say;
to speak with someone who truly listens
pause a moment, and simply pray.
Everything must go on, living and dying day by day,
as slowly we all cross the line of time, and leave behind
those old drab shades of gray.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 24 June 2020

Let's see. What are my favorite lines? The divide is narrow between a want and a need. It's always hard to say the color of the soul when wrapped in so many shades of gray. In every yesterday, today and tomorrow, the fleeting laughter moves on turning our own fragile joy into such precarious sorrow. What if tomorrow never comes? What then shall by heaven and earth be done?

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Lawerence Mize 24 June 2020

Wonderful poem Smoky. Everything does go on. Time stops for no one.

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Shaun Cronick 24 June 2020

A fine poem well written with a more than fine moral thinking message. Thank you sir for writing and sharing your poem, I enjoyed reading it.10++ and take care

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Susan Williams 24 June 2020

Oh. My. Word. This is stunning. You've taken off your cowboy hat with a vengeance! The lines glide, the rhymes are smooth as glass and never interfere with the message, and the message is untamed and running free and I can not find a fault in it anywhere! ! !

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Mahtab Bangalee 23 June 2020

beautiful inside feelings; beautifully shared the expression good wish always makes good moral human mind........

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Glen Kappy 29 July 2020

I definitely relate to this meditation, Smoky. Ultimately, I remind myself, it’s our reputation with God that matters; when it comes to that, I want to hear “well done.” The fame thing, I wonder if it’s mainly an extension of the need we all have to be recognized. -Glen

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Cowboy Ron Williams 28 July 2020

You and Mother Teresa can both ride with me any day! See you around the campfire! Bring your guitar! My latest poem is " Bacon, Beans, and Big Cats" .

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Cowboy Ron Williams 01 July 2020

Excellent! The first poem to my favorites list! I would invite you to read my poems, but I have a new account and my poems are not yet activated. I have five of them. Every time I post a new one I get this message: Your poems will be activated after they are approved by the system administrator.

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Susan Williams 24 June 2020

Everything must go on, living and dying day by day, as slowly we all cross the line of time, and leave behind those old drab shades of gray. ======ooops they are all my fav lines 10+++++++++++++++++++++++ and onto my fav list

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Susan Williams 24 June 2020

We all waste too much time talking to those who care not for what we say; to speak with someone who truly listens pause a moment, and simply pray.

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