Shadows Poem by Rebecca Navarre

Shadows

Rating: 5.0


Shadows so blue, underneath
the moon, move. They whisper
as they play. In the leaves
that are falling, and blow
away. Soon will come the
mornings rays. And into its
beams, they'll escape. Looking
for brightness, in a new day.

Sunday, March 10, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: hope,saddened
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 21 March 2019

a shadow chases after the hope for life as the blue soul!

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Rebecca Navarre 21 March 2019

Thank you! .. Mahtab, For your very beautiful and kind reply! .. God bless! ..

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 March 2019

And into its beams, they'll escape. Looking for brightness, in a new day.......so touching and meaningful. Beautiful poem with a philosophical base. Thanks for sharing.10

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Rebecca Navarre 21 March 2019

Thank you! .. Kumarmani, Always honored by your beautifully kind and inspiring replies! .. God bless! ..

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Susan Williams 16 March 2019

Looking for brightness, in a new day. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - > This seems to be what you do in your life. This is a very moving poem pointing us to a brighter destination. 1000000000000000000000000000000 tens! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Rebecca Navarre 21 March 2019

:) Thank you! .. Dear Susan, For bringing me smiles, and such an ever so beautifully kind reply! .. God bless dear friend! .. And wish you ever so many smiles too! ..

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Dr Dillip K Swain 15 March 2019

The beauty of this wonderful poem lies with the phrase, 'They whisper as they play' An excellent poem.....10

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Rebecca Navarre 21 March 2019

Thank you! .. Dr. Dillip, For such a thoughtful and beautifully kind reply! .. Ever so many blessings! ..

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Unnikrishnan E S 13 March 2019

Hi Becca, Lovely write.... Shadows.... (moonlit night) Soon will come the morning rays.... Into its beams, it will escape.. Wonderfully written.

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Rebecca Navarre 14 March 2019

Thank you! .. Unnikrishnan, For your beautifully thoughtful and beautifully kind reply! .. Ever so many blessings! ..

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