Shadows Poem by Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair

Shadows

Rating: 4.4


I am a shadow
A dark shadow with frozen fire inside
Every glance that falls on me
Is a cannon ball that bears
The colour of toxic aversion
It makes me dark melancholic black
Forbidden is to me the right
To aspire a hide other than black
My thirst and hunger is numbed
Brandishing whips and threatening to flay
Wild tribal dance kicking and stamping
Was performed on my lashed and wealed back
I am dumb having pulled off my tongue
I am blind having been gouged out the eye balls
And deafened by pouring in to the ears molten lead
The fire inside will blaze into an inferno
That will burn down to ashes your fortress
Together with the booty of colourful life
Looted from humble truths
And leaving them as lifeless shadows

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Exploitation is avenged
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Yoonoos Peerbocus 23 May 2020

how significantly you have given your version of life experience, , fine

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Thank you dear poet for the comments. This shadow is the silent mind of the oppressed

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 November 2021

Every glance that falls on me Is a cannon ball that bears The colour of toxic aversion....scintillating expression sir. An excellent poem.....top score!

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Suresh Kumar Ek 09 September 2020

inferno inside the poet makes the poem ignited

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This is a very sad poem. It is terrible to see when lives- whether human or animal, is exploited and treated with cruelty and callousness. A touching write, Parameswaran ji.........10

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A deeply moving and poignant write. A vivid portrayal of life's experiences. Excellently written with great imagery as always.

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Thank you very much dear poetess. It's painful for me to see human beings are treated like lifeless shadows

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Thank you dear poetess for the encouraging words.Its really a matter of pain for me to see human beings are treated like shadows

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Anil Kumar Panda 24 May 2020

A nice poem on the ups and downs of life. Very nicely crafted to touch the heart. Loved it. 'Together with the booty of colourful life Looted from humble truths And leaving them as lifeless shadows.... is so nice. Thanks for sharing.

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Thank you dear AKP. The silent shadow that survives the cruel tetst of time represents the oppressed

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