Shadows Of Life Comments

a very beautiful poem sir......very thoughtful..10

very well penned sir...........

This is an exceptional poem, CP. Your final couplet in particular leaves the reader saying to herself: 'Now why didn't I think of that? ' You have a great gift for phrasing and the spiritual intelligence that underpins your work shines through the lines. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

dear friend your poems are great and wonderfull poems i really appriciate you and your vivid ideas well done

The greatest mystery of them all is life...you've written this superb poem with depth and flowing pace....gives much to ponder on.....well expressed 10

We created our own fear of the shadows.Life is an open field, needing us to cultivate, into a vast plantation.Well written piece Sharma.

very meaningful... LIFE..its mystery, its meaning the play of life.like a stage play... our existence...how we live, how to live fruitful thoughts you shared...thoughts' provoking.. thanks Sir...this will open our mind and reflect with our hearts.. 10+++ lovelots, maia

play of light and shadow in life- whole life is spent making sense of it. and then we begin to wonder are we merely puppets and the strings in somebody else's hand. a very thought provoking poem build beautifully. last lines worth pondering over. 10 Mamta

i love the last line here, CP. And i agree with Lynda here..a thought provoking piece. A great write.

A very thought provoking poem CP, as always you have excelled, 10 Lynda xx

Many are called but few are chosen. A wonderful poem CP, very thought provoking. Best wishes, Andrew

Your poem has has incited discussion and this is what great poetry is all about. Wonderful writing. 10 Karin Anderson

The last line captures an essence of life

A deeply introspective piece. Are we predestined in this life experience? Some believe that, some do not. And after all, are we not products of our beliefs? No one will ever come back and give us the answers we seek, so we can only draw our own conclusions. What is life, afterall, but another level of existence, pre-programmed or otherwise. Who knows.......this could be the MATRIX!

A thought provoking piece......yes we are all pre-programmed and whether we reach the hall of fame or not....

the pain us hurt........ all are pre-programmed just they express words well knitted and ready to express..... vanish in the air.... when they suffer the same words they in take and feel the pain....... shadows of life I like the expressions.........

And after all what is God.........The eternal child, playing the eternal game in the eternal garden.........Sri Aurobindo..............Offcourse he plays at our expense...........cheers......Perhaps God is a magician who is performing in the front of the audience who are too terrified to laugh.................a good write.......

i strongly believe we are pre-programmed even b4 we touched this earth...hall of fame or defame, shadows or light are all mere illusions in this pre-programme, aren't they?

A nice one! thoughtful and meaningful all through...beautifully penned.10

the way u bind your words and your vocabulary really speel binds me sir AR