She Fainted Away Poem by Dee Daffodil

She Fainted Away

Rating: 5.0


This is a poem that my five year old daughter wrote...

We painted our hands
Black and gray
We showed our Mom...
She fainted away! ! !

February 16,2007 (EW)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tranquil Ocean 16 February 2007

How sweet! ! Girls r so adorable! Love...TO

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Ernestine Northover 16 February 2007

Hey that's a great little poem. Loved it. Snazzy ending too. You should have put your head between your knees, that would have bought you round. Give her a hug from me. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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David Threadgold 06 September 2008

Hi Dee. I like this one very simple and childlike it makes you smile when you think of the mess. well done. Regards Dave T.

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Barry Van Allen 14 March 2007

Dee, Ernestine was close, but she didn't ask the question. So I will - - - ' When mom woke up, was her face black and gray? '

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Alison Cassidy 28 February 2007

I'm giving her a ten. If I could I'd give her a whole lot more. What a clever little girl. Wonderful verse! No wonder you posted it. love, Allie xxxx

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Diane Violet 25 February 2007

Awww, this is cute Dee, a budding poet I see! Hugs, Diane

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Ted Sheridan 22 February 2007

She writes better than most. Must get it from Mom.

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