She's Electric Poem by Practicing Poetess
She's Electric
She lights up the place
With her mega-watt smile
When she walks into a room,
She's electric.
And heads turn in unison
Admiring her style
Can't stop watching too soon,
She's electric.
She inspires nicknames
Songbird, Giggles, Sunshine,
Honey, Lover, Bright Eyes,
So eclectic.
And she likes to spread joy
She's a hit with the boys
Never lacking for poise,
Miss Electric.
Poem written April 21,2019
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i like the use (once) of eclectic. now, all you need to do to write about ME is to change 7 " she" s/" she's" to 7 " he" s/" he's" , one " Miss" to one " Mr" , and 2 " her" s to 2 " his" s. bri ;)
She sounds like a women who knows how to sizzle, and knows how to make a everyman shrivel, passionate and playful, I like the sexiness of this piece. can we have more?
Kevin, I'm back on site now after an extensive absence due to moving- - I'll get to work on that 'more' posthaste! Thanks for reading and commenting! : -)
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4/25/2024 9:18:45 AM # 1.0.0.1119
'Eclectic' goes so well with 'electric' I was wondering if you were going to name Miss Electric-like Beyonce. I like her.
Thanks, Michael. I didn't exactly have Beyonce in mind when I wrote this. But, happy for you that you like her! : -)