Short Poem-10 Poem by Bharati Nayak
Short Poem-10
A sudden shower
The smell of wet earth
Ah! The cool afternoon
Superb! ! ! ! The smell of moist air after rain is very dear to me.
Excellent. I love the smell of wet earth after a rain.
Bharati, I LIKE this, but I don't read, nor find that I like, much Haiku. This IS Haiku I believe! ;) bri p.s. somehow 'rain' is spelled 'raine' in the 'topics'.
This is NOT a haiku, Bri, it is what poetess Bharati told us: a short poem. Haiku consists of 5-7-5 syllables
The short poems are my attempt to write Haiku.I am not sure whether they are haiku or not.Anyway thanks for liking my short poem/Haiku.
A short poem but of great depth. I can feel the shower and the wet earth in your poem.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/19/2024 12:00:03 AM # 1.0.0.1119
I could really smell the wet earth! This haiku was so well written. Amazing, thankyou.