Simple Verse. No.6- Simple Pleasures Poem by Valsa George

Simple Verse. No.6- Simple Pleasures

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Riding down on the wheels of Time,
Through the bends and curves of weary life,
Pleasure it was to halt awhile,
At the start of life as a little kid,

Much we enjoyed those care free days,
With fun and frolic all around,
Nothing to bother and none to nag,
Far removed from staring gaze.

Great it was to ‘dwell' inside,
The house we built with twigs and leaves.
We donned the guise of ‘Dad and Mom',
And ate the dish, we cooked instant.

Fun it was to play ‘Hide n' Seek',
With friends reversing the role in turn,
The cop chasing the thief in hide,
And the thief evading the cop in chase.

Foolish it was to bury beneath,
Many a coin-shining bright,
With hopes to see them sprout some time,
Yielding thousands for the autumn pick.

When the rain came tumbling down,
With water filling every pond and well,
We devised far brighter schemes,
To enjoy life in better ways.

We caught the ants and lady birds,
And put them inside paper boats,
We watched them being set afloat,
Over the muddy puddles left by rain.

With thrill gripping every nerve,
And wonder glistening our curious eyes,
We caught the ‘Minnows' one by one,
Those trapped within the towel spread,

Picking each with careful hands,
We moved them into a tiny pond.
Darting down and coming up,
We watched them, swim all around.

Little things and petty scenes,
Thus filled our hearts with instant joy.
Life never seemed dull or drab,
With each day holding its own charm,

Bliss it was that childhood state,
But sad, it remained a brief interlude,
Staying here on this shore of life,
The other side seems greener far!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Heather Wilkins 12 July 2013

childhood is a blissful sate dear Valsa. A simple lovely time in our lives. carefree and wonderful. nice write

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Chandra Thiagarajan 12 July 2013

Childhood reminiscences are so aptly captured in this wonderful poem, Valsa! It transported me to the golden childhood once again.The last para' is fantastic! ; Enjoyed!

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R.j. Wynn 12 July 2013

Very different than I expected and bright. Thanks.

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David Wood 12 July 2013

I agree with Anthony below, childhood's rich tapestry of beautiful memories. Graet poem Valsa

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Tribhawan Kaul 12 July 2013

Simple pleasures- -yest apt title and expressive too. Small pleasures during our childhood and youth used to make a lot of difference in our lives..Little things and petty scenes, Thus filled our hearts with instant joy. Life never seemed dull or drab, With each day holding its own charm, This stanza sums up the idea of simple pleasures. Excellent poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 August 2018

Fun it was to play ‘Hide n' Seek', With friends reversing the role in turn, The cop chasing the thief in hide, And the thief evading the cop in chase................impressive lines with amusing depiction and nice theme. A beautiful poem on pleasure having pleasant expression.10

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Akhtar Jawad 14 May 2018

What a beautiful description of a time, that has gone with the winds, But I listen to music of the gone time, who are the flowers I feel the the aroma that was lost, My grandchildren singing my forgotten rime!

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Savita Tyagi 24 July 2013

Beautiful poem! Those childhood memories a treasure to keep and cherish.

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Geetha Jayakumar 24 July 2013

Childhood is a blissful state. We enjoyed all those games and fun. But dont know how the new generation going to write on their childhood memories.....brought back the old memories..

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Soulful Heart 13 July 2013

Such inricacies of chilhood, cherished n treaaured in this poem lyrically packed....

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