Simple Verse. No.7 - Morning Walk Poem by Valsa George

Simple Verse. No.7 - Morning Walk

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Walking is a good outdoor sport
You'll never rust or tire out
Fresh air you freely inhale
That'll keep you healthy n' hale

Toxic air you unconciously exhale
Lungs rid of impurities stale
Strange vistas will unravel
Over them you can marvel

Many greet you on your way with smiles
Make you forget the tedium of miles
Limbs, on allowed more rest
Body's natural rhythm, it will arrest

When people are in brisk motion
They would forget all commotion
Walking relieves you of much tension
And life will parade in new dimension

Monday, November 4, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: walking
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tirupathi Chandrupatla 07 November 2013

Many resolve to walk and find a reason to skip it, myself included. Reading your poem provides the impetus, motivation, and inspiration to get out and move. Thank you.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 07 November 2013

Wow hav u heard of d famous poetic phrase, 'poetry in motion'. Well this is yor class of impressive poetry in motion. Fabulous rhymin exhortation to walkin. Yeah lets spare d rickshaw n do some walkin. Its d only exercise i luv coz i dont enjoy pushups n situps. Fond regards valsa

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Dinesan Madathil 06 November 2013

But I see these morning walkers with a different view. In the morning they are seen on the smooth sides of the roads and when one drives forward they walk before and announce indirectly ' mind your vehicle'. Madam Valsa, these health maniacs are slowly becoming a menace on the roads... I am afraid, after reading your poem some of our poets will be adding to the woes. Walk safe, walk alone and kindly avoid an army of walkers.

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Kavya . 06 November 2013

a nice one Mam...yes morning walk is indeed healthy and soothing and relieves of all tensions and commotions.......but difficult for those who are lazy and rise up late in the morning: -)

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Valerie Dohren 05 November 2013

Walking is wonderful exercise, especially when out in the country - very healthy and good for the soul.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 August 2019

You have so nicely and astutely delineated the merits of morning walk in this poem. We should have morning walk daily in the early morning for better health and peace. It may be cited....Walking relieves you of much tension And life will parade in new dimension A marvelous poem is amazingly shared..10

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Shahzia Batool 09 December 2013

Simple verse but informative as well...i feel down as walking is not in my routine...yes, i miss it! ! !

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Patricia Grantham 18 November 2013

Very nice write. I for one happen to love walking. You get to see all of the colors of leaves changing. The Autumnal breeze flows all around you and the mind gets a real workout plus the body stays in motion that will do it a world of good. Lovely.

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Queeny Gona 11 November 2013

With robotic life style man doesn't have time to rest and pace with life's vital pleasures further adding up to illness to the body hence little physical exercise is a must to have good health! Wonderful read mam and as Dinesh Nair ji said it has the other impact too! Keen observation by you dear Sir!

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David Wood 09 November 2013

I love walking, particularly with my dog Clara. Most people greet me with a 'hello', but it is alway nice to come home afterwards.

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