Sin: O( Poem by elsee daniel
Sin: O(
Heart filled with sorrows.
Eyes filled with tears;
I am trying to come near.
To stand in front of you.
And tell you my wishes are few;
I stand last in the row.
And then realized the devil is waiting to throw;
Hot blazing fire, horrible creatures.
Now I regret for not listening to any of my preachers.
Save me Lord!
i felt the poem could have been expressed even more clear, and its really too short i felt words were lacking intense expressions
very nice very nice poem...but idk...it's seems as though u didn't fully describe how u felt in the poem...like u didn't really didn't write all the words u wanted to write...never hold back on a poem...if it's what u feel right down the WHOLE feeling not just bit's an parts...be true to what u write...that is what i do...=)
Great flow oif words, and sentimental approach......wonderful poem.....please keep on with your art.
When things go so bad, people usually remember God. A good message to remind one that it is good to heed to the words of God.
sin and acceptance of the same is another route to divine realization well done!
you are selected every words with very careful..nice
this regret all of us seem to have...a different kind of poem on sin
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/5/2025 10:21:32 AM # 1.0.0
a very nice poem..keep writing and wish u achieve all your hopes and wishes :)