in the midmost shrine of Aji Jayabaya – cloudy sky
the myriad-tinkling attacks – in its deeps a poem maiden craves
shuffle of waves' leaves – draw close – tender eyes
warbling drawl of bluish clarinets – where the king cooled heart's beat
(dedicated to a great poet, Gary Snyder)
Poem written in a telegraphic style, using powerful words.
I saw it in my mind's eye... nice nice Ahmad, Thanks For Sharing your sketchs.
wonderful poem, metaphors well embedded, lovely to read...........
I have to say all the 5 sketches make a beautiful picturesque especially this lyrical and adorable piece.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Sketches are nice to read! Detailed sketches are welcomed!