So Long Poem by LeeAnn Azzopardi

So Long

Rating: 4.9


So long, my love
I'm leaving not because of you
But of a dream
That I spent a lifetime pursuing
And it will die if I stay
As it is more important to me than love
So long, dear
I will never lose the vision of yr face
When I am old and writing my memoir
I will be reminded of the times we have
Like watching the stars fall
Or reading tea leaves to see the outcome
But my ride is coming
And I have new adventures to conquest
I hope you'll understand that I want to be free

Saturday, July 30, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: freedom,dream,breaking up
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 30 July 2022

A very touching and poignant poem so tenderly expressed. Yes, our dreams will haunt us in our lifetime until they become realized.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 July 2022

Beautiful... beautifully put.5 stars

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 30 July 2022

Sometimes it is hard to choose between love and dream yet there are times that we can have them both without sacrificing the other. A wonderful poem.

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Richard Wlodarski 30 July 2022

LeeAnn, CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR JOURNEY TO LIBERTY! An excellent bittersweet poem. Beautifully conveyed in your inimitable style.

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Jayne Louise Davies 31 July 2022

Beautiful LeeAnn x Five stars*

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Anjandev Roy 22 August 2022

Magnificent work........

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Nabakishore Dash 03 August 2022

Excellent poem, very heart rending between two opposing lures.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 01 August 2022

A heart-touching poem dear LeeAnn......10

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 01 August 2022

Freedom is so important in life. Sometimes, a goodbye is inevitable however sad it is.

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Nosheen Irfan 01 August 2022

Breakup is painful but sometimes it's inevitable. Well crafted!

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