So Near Yet So Distant Poem by Reshma Ramesh

So Near Yet So Distant

Rating: 4.1


The day I loved you
My dear, I am all praise for
Your love and compassion,
Attentive gaze, The way you
Look for thorns on my path
The way you warm the air
As I walk in the cold
Evening, the wine you
Sipped I can taste on
Your lips, pull the curtain
Of love around us
I hold you dear, for you
Are my reflection in
The mirror of our love
I see in the depth of
Your eyes, my tears
In the depth of your
Heart, my being beats
In your remembrance.
My love, in my dreams
I see us as one
When I woke, tears flowing
Down my cheeks, your
Hands not here to wipe them
So near yet so distant

Sequel to the poem 'So near yet so distant' from poet Sadiqullah Khan

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shimon Weinroth 29 October 2008

the saga of sentiments, unfortunately we behold what we want, to be, hoping that passion will turn into compassion as well, the meanderings of feelings are manifold alas often fall on the rock of disappointment, the poem poignantly expressed the sensitive tender and sad,10

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Rakhi Jayashankar 28 October 2008

love is the feeling that we comprehend in evry breath evry heart beat very romantic poem from a talented and romantic poet

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Seema Aarella 28 October 2008

The yearning of a lover...the wait and the pain of loneliness...the depth of love....a very good read! well done Reshma!

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Jerry Hughes 28 October 2008

Tears of joy or regret? Whichever, a fine piece of writing Reshma...

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Joseph Poewhit 28 October 2008

Very sensative poem of love

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Colin Jeffery 01 November 2008

Powerful poem well done

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Dr.Wardha Jawdat 01 November 2008

kudos.....excellent write.

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Chitra - 30 October 2008

a tender write from an equally tender heart!

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Gargi Saha 30 October 2008

A very romantic poem.10++

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Paolo Giuseppe Mazzarello 29 October 2008

Romantic themes in this poem by a sensitive author. However some sensual tones are oriental, just to pay a compliment more than an analysis.

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Reshma Ramesh

Reshma Ramesh

Bangalore, India
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