Some Poems Are. Poem by Sandra Feldman

Some Poems Are.

Rating: 5.0

Some poems are
More like a prayer
For us to live
In peace and unity
Under the Stars,
In love and care.

Yes,
Some poems are
Those dreams well thought
Yet not attained,
In violence caught.

What will it take
To live in peace?
To have the harmony
Not violent, beasts
That kill each other.

We are strange creatures
Unclassified,
No longer cavemen
But still,
Uncivilized...

















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COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Absolutely! When you read a poem it should be like a prayer bringing peace and harmony. There is no place for violence, hatred and jealousy in poetry.

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Richard Wlodarski 04 May 2022

This heart-felt prayer poem is sending out so much positive energy into the universe. We desperately need this energy to assist us in returning to be civilized. Top marks for a top notch poetess. Thank you, Sandra!

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Panagiota Romios 04 May 2022

Hi Sandra! It's me Panagiota.I gave a 5 and commented to your most reverb poem. I have no idea how to post here

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Jayne Davies 04 May 2022

Great poem! Well done. x

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 04 May 2022

I agree with Rose Marie indefenatively Bravo!

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Sandra Feldman 09 May 2022

Thank you, All so much! Ad with your generous collaboration, dear Poets, maybe still it's not too late to change some things in this beloved, crazy World!

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Nabakishore Dash 05 May 2022

No longer cave men, but still uncivilized.Great observation and nice write revered Sandra.

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Wonderful poem… "we are strange…/no longer cave-men/yet uncivilised

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Awesome! ......top score........ : )

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Yes dearest friend Sandra, let us cultivate a civilized world around us through beautiful poetry.

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