Sometimes Puppet Mumbles Poem by Muhammad Ali

In conclusion, you believe that Life is fun, dark, and swing...and death is freedom you have a beautiful poem and idea, but i think life is a mixture, tones are from pale to darkest and fragile.. bout death, i can conclude yet coz i am still alive, my present thinking can go beyond the real territory..let die first then i will tell u hahahahaha :) Nice poem Ali, keep it up

Like two different minds each with their own views? A very thought provoking poem dear Ali, thank you.

Let me quote from this amazing poem- No path... Such paths I walk, I run Strings are life Life is fun No color, such colors I see, I mark Strings are life Life is dark

What a lovely poetic expression of mystic feelings ! We are nothing but puppets in the hands of Almighty.We sing, dance or cry by His wishes.By the wishes of Almighty we see colour in no colour, find path where there is no path find words when there are no words to express and see light in darkness! To my poem list.

A very intriguing style and that title is perfection, I am putting this on my fav list as well as giving it a big 10++++++

Indeed freedom is death. This is a great thoughtprovoking poem with a superb refrain, the strings of life, all in all great muse! Thumbs up! Pls pleez do comment/ review my newest poem too titled, " The Hajj pilgrimage "

There is just a certainly quality in the words. The tone is magnificent. I am reminded almost of a lullaby....a hint of reassurance, even when life seems to turn its darkest face. This verse goes to myfavourites. Magnificent poem, Ali.