Sometimes Waiting Poem by Heather Burns
Sometimes Waiting
Sometimes in the morning
dewdrops melt away
giving up their moisture
for another day
sometimes in the evening
Mr. Moon comes shining through
creating elusive visions
For each of us to view.
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a very focused write with a rhyming structure...Ms. Burns, your poems are always brief, lucid and witty! ! ! an interesting thing about the gender of the moon is that in our native and national language urdu Moon is male as you addressed as Mr. personifying it so creatively, and sometimes it is addressed as goddess moon...it is frequently used and variously interpreted phenomenon in poetry from the world of nature! beautiful poem! ! !
Morning sun and moon at night creating vanishing dew and beautiful illusions. Nice poem.
Could see my mind in peace as i read this poem... that tells the level of this poem.
Dewdrops and moon have a magical appeal on mood! Lovely poem!
It's a nature's mood, like today you'll take sandwich and tomorrow a burger .... nice reading
sometimes................everything is a hope of these sometimes to be everytime...isn't it?
Hi Heather a lovely poem showing natures beauty from morning to evening we sometimes take it all for granted so a nice timely reminder
I always love the elusive, fleeting Mr Moon! I like this charming little poem,
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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liked the poem with end rhyming...sweet poem