Each time your face is lit up by a smile
The world becomes a much happier place
A radiant smile shows that you are hale
It slackens muscles, lighting up your face
A hearty smile erases many a frown
And love kept alive for a little while
Even when you are miserably down
Face the world with a put on gentle smile
A sweet smile illuminates all around
It fills the gloomy Earth with brighter light
It can lift even those in sorrows drowned
Making their murky selves joyous and bright
If you can cause to make others smile
You're scripting for you a better profile
Sonnet is hard to write. You made it look so simple with a smile. Shakespearean rhyme scheme you followed is most popular and you did a great job in your composition. Thank you for sharing a smile.
Smile sparks light of love and wisdom in such an interesting composition. Sweetness of smile illuminates the first gloomy Earth around us. Making others smile is definitely joyful act. Lighting up face with Godly wisdom revives our faith and tightens humanity in relationship. Very interesting and excellent poem shared really.10
and once again you have made me smile something I had not done for awhile reading your poem light up my day and my blues are all driven away Thanks Valsa
sweet smile illuminates all around It fills the gloomy Earth with brighter light It can lift even those in sorrows drowned Making their murky selves joyous and bright........so true. Nice poetic expression with lofty theme. A brilliant poem is fantastically delineated that i have visited twice.
I read your poem, I read your note, I think it's a wonderful poem with a great message. If you can cause to make others smile You're scripting for you a better profile
A sweet smile! ! To bring joy to the heart. Thanks for sharing.
Noone thinks of syllables or rhyme when it is perfect.It's then exactly when the content shines as yours here, dear Lady.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Dear Valsa, you made me smile with your beautiful sonnet.! It is so wonderful to see a lovely smile on the faces of people. It illuminates and radiates joy all around. A big smile has to get a big 10. :)