Soul-Breakers Poem by Dr Hitesh Sheth

Soul-Breakers

Rating: 5.0


Oh! bloody thirsty soul breakers
Oh! manipulative nerve wreckers;
Playing with the beings like puppets,
Relishing their hearts in buffets.

Oh! Self righteous naivete
Don’t treat people as hapless pawns,
Don’t blackout their rose tinged dawns;
Stop thinking, you are beyond his laws,
Stop thinking, you can escape his claws.
Oh leech! Don't increase your karmic debts
Recall Ye! How evil doers wept.

Oh! Sower of the bad karmic seeds,
He longs to punish your talks and deeds;
He waits to strike at opportune time
And to make you pay for your heinous crime.
For the punisher watches from above
And keeps a tab on your talks and moves.

He weaves the whip from sighs of oppressed
And soaks it in tears of depressed.
His lashes produce, weals of adverse times,
And would throw away your blood hued wines.

When he would strike with his thunderbolt,
The mother earth would refuse to hold
The sky would refuse to shelter
And your shanks would run helter-skelter.

So fear oh! Cruel heart breakers,
For he is God, your soul breaker.

Dr Hitesh C Sheth
25/05/09

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lee Crowell 03 June 2009

Doctor! I believe this is your best write with a strong train of thought, a strong rhythm, and I love the message of warning to the evil few who manage to cause pain to many. thanks for sharing this

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Antonio Liao 01 June 2009

like winged immortal bird sees everything....yet! nature capture the meaning of existence...Yah! we want to stop everything that is not fitting and good for human...but the passion of pain remain in each heart of a person and its His/Her freedom to do....your poem ignite every poet and reader to wonder the meaning of all that exist... thank you...a perfect lines for reflection....a 10+++++ for you

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Catrina Heart 01 June 2009

The vultures and chameleons should have read this master piece.....powerful eloquent poem written....10+++

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Seema Aarella 01 June 2009

Powerful and hits the conscience straight.......wish this message is passed, a must read for all, thanks Hitesh

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Nimal Dunuhinga 01 June 2009

If Romeo & Juliette still alive? Definitely they come to you Doctor for a full check up.

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Raja Basu 05 July 2009

A powerful message for the ones who have deviated from the line of ethics, values and principles. Splendid!

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<font color =fusha>Amy 18 June 2009

this is amazing, you have so much talent!

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Elaine Oxamendi Vicet 07 June 2009

A greater God Being indeed will set it all right; in spite of our self proclaimed greatness. Good write.

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Vinod Kumar 04 June 2009

Amazing much impresived for peace keepers

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Lynda Robson 03 June 2009

A wonderful write Doctor, well thought out and with a good message, 10 Lynda xx

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