Oh! bloody thirsty soul breakers
Oh! manipulative nerve wreckers;
Playing with the beings like puppets,
Relishing their hearts in buffets.
Oh! Self righteous naivete
Don’t treat people as hapless pawns,
Don’t blackout their rose tinged dawns;
Stop thinking, you are beyond his laws,
Stop thinking, you can escape his claws.
Oh leech! Don't increase your karmic debts
Recall Ye! How evil doers wept.
Oh! Sower of the bad karmic seeds,
He longs to punish your talks and deeds;
He waits to strike at opportune time
And to make you pay for your heinous crime.
For the punisher watches from above
And keeps a tab on your talks and moves.
He weaves the whip from sighs of oppressed
And soaks it in tears of depressed.
His lashes produce, weals of adverse times,
And would throw away your blood hued wines.
When he would strike with his thunderbolt,
The mother earth would refuse to hold
The sky would refuse to shelter
And your shanks would run helter-skelter.
So fear oh! Cruel heart breakers,
For he is God, your soul breaker.
Dr Hitesh C Sheth
25/05/09
like winged immortal bird sees everything....yet! nature capture the meaning of existence...Yah! we want to stop everything that is not fitting and good for human...but the passion of pain remain in each heart of a person and its His/Her freedom to do....your poem ignite every poet and reader to wonder the meaning of all that exist... thank you...a perfect lines for reflection....a 10+++++ for you
The vultures and chameleons should have read this master piece.....powerful eloquent poem written....10+++
Powerful and hits the conscience straight.......wish this message is passed, a must read for all, thanks Hitesh
If Romeo & Juliette still alive? Definitely they come to you Doctor for a full check up.
A powerful message for the ones who have deviated from the line of ethics, values and principles. Splendid!
A greater God Being indeed will set it all right; in spite of our self proclaimed greatness. Good write.
A wonderful write Doctor, well thought out and with a good message, 10 Lynda xx
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Doctor! I believe this is your best write with a strong train of thought, a strong rhythm, and I love the message of warning to the evil few who manage to cause pain to many. thanks for sharing this