Stories Poem by Valerie Dohren

Stories

Rating: 5.0


There are many stories to tell
but they die in the telling …

Voices tremble
and words falter.

Eyes close
on the reality they conceal.

No-one will ever know
these stories -

they remain untold.

The pain is too immense

so they die

in the telling.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Danny Draper 25 October 2013

The sadness and melancholy is palpable, and yet this sensitive and insightful piece deftly and beautifully shows the truth of loss and the stories end and untold. Beautiful, thank you.

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Om Chawla 25 October 2013

The pain cannot be shared by even the best of friends; it must fade with passage of time and some stories will remain engraved in memory. an excellent write.

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Dave Walker 24 October 2013

Hopefully the pain may fade with time and the good memories will stay. A great poem.

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Marvin Brato 28 October 2013

Poets may die writing, but poems they compost shall live forever!

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Unwritten Soul 27 October 2013

Killing in beautiful action....this write is dangerous, , hahahaha_Soul

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Sad stories written with the ink of nondisclosure on the canvass of the heart.

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Paul Brookes 17 November 2013

Mute the stones and sad the tales that die unsaid A lovely poem of sad beauty. BB: O)

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Valsa George 06 November 2013

When heart is full, words are few! Succinctly and poignantly put! !

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Smoky Hoss 03 November 2013

You've touched deep places in the heart here. Amazing.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 29 October 2013

Many untold stories. That seems to be the secret of life. Beautiful poem. Thank you.

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