Strangers* Poem by C. P. Sharma

Strangers*

Rating: 5.0


What a strange relationship?
My body and the spirit lived together the whole life,
But couldn’t dialogue! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

* I owe the thought to the Urdu poet

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 31 July 2009

Succinct and insightful - your words ring truth, spiritually speaking. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Anjali Sinha 31 July 2009

interesting thought good write....... -10 anjali

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Irene Clark-hogg 30 July 2009

What an interesting statement. Perhaps this is why we remain children. Irene

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Ivor Hogg 28 July 2009

Enlightenment is not easy to attain Sir

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Nikunj Sharma 28 July 2009

I am in same boat.....nice write sir

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Ruth Walters 19 August 2009

well I don't talk to the bus that carries me although I sometimes coax my car along hee hee: -) but my body carries my spirit and we are great travel companions except when my body goes wrong or we run out of fuel ; -) Ruthy

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Ana Zaldivar 11 August 2009

Intresting expression.. makes me think a lot...

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Onelia Avelar 08 August 2009

:) You really make me think; formulated like this it seems really strange - like an anomaly - the lack of dialogue between body and spirit, we are so used to this, that we rarely think about it. You make me wanna talk to my organs :) but alas I find they do not listen to me. You make me feel like marionette :) . Good work!

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Bob Blackwell 02 August 2009

The body holds the ego, the spirit is our own true self, while the ego battles with itself, our spirit is eternal and serene. Wonderful wisdom in just three lines.

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Vaibhav Pandey 01 August 2009

profound thoughts sir....very meaningful indeed......10

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C. P. Sharma

C. P. Sharma

Bissau, Rajasthan
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