He grabbed her neck & clung on tight,
He suffocated her, she suffocated him.
Smoking'll eventually kill you
smoke the flame evaporating this journey decaying the moment of the age but endlessly nowhere the glittering around of four walls but, grey the dust of hope barrier in the throat tunnel suffocation dancing in near nano second
Both suffocated each other in smoking....succinct yet very magnificent.....10++
Smoking is a bad habit! ! ! ! ! ⚠️🚭 Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
He grabbed her neck & clung on tight, short and meaningful evil that creeps in.. tony
Smoking detrimental to health...........well to liner sad story teller.......congrats.....10+ from me
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A well crafted poem of the day. Short yet powerful. Congrats on your featured piece.....10+++