poet Kewayne Wadley

Kewayne Wadley

Pebble In The Sea

I watched her walk away,
Her lanky arms swung in the wind,
Her jacket softly brushed against itself,
Painted a soft dull green,
Her hair hid under her knitted woven hat,
Showing the lower lobe of her ears,
Where her earrings matched her bright white smile,
A joyous occusion,
To see her smile,
Her eyes peeked through the clear lens of her thick black glasses,
I can't help but think,
Anything else would be an understatement,
Would I think the same thing,
Through someone else's eyes,
Such music,
The way her voice vocalized,
The indentions left in her cheeks,
Her skin wore a radiant brown,
Beautiful in color,
Her blush shown red as her cheeks could go no higher,
Her smile stretched comfortably across her face,
Leaving more to the imagination,
If I gave my eyes to someone else,
Would they see the same as I saw,
No longer blind as I felt I could be myself,
No longer a pebble in the sea of her eye

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Poem Submitted: Friday, February 27, 2015

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  • Dr Tony BrahminDr Tony Brahmin (3/25/2020 3:10:00 PM)

    If I gave my eyes to someone else,
    Would they see the same as I saw,
    No longer blind as I felt I could be myself,
    No longer a pebble in the sea of her eye.. expressions of love.. you are very original in your wiritng and presentation.. thank yu dear poet. tony

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  • Denis MairDenis Mair (12/24/2019 9:08:00 AM)

    Those eyes scanning a face follow a unique line. If that line could be faithfully transcribed, then a map reader could follow it, and it would delineate a territory of loving philosophy. Yes, I think we could look thru another's eyes, glancing from detail to detail. But if there were just a pebble's single view, there would be nothing to sweep us along.

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  • Jennifer BirchallJennifer Birchall (1/7/2019 2:54:00 PM)

    A beautiful poem about your love Kewayne

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  • Howard The Motivational Poet SimonHoward The Motivational Poet Simon (4/5/2018 7:50:00 PM)

    Loaded with a love that is lovely! Well done!

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  • Irma G (9/12/2017 8:27:00 PM)

    this is beautiful, really

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  • M Asim NehalM Asim Nehal (12/12/2015 1:55:00 PM)

    Superb poem...Left me wondering and speechlessssssssssssss..10+++

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  • Me Poet Yeps PoetMe Poet Yeps Poet (12/5/2015 7:31:00 PM)

    at your age
    eyes only smile
    as did mine

    now my mind has wrinkles
    and kinks
    can you see em?
    the gal has changed so much
    was she that she
    I wonder so will ye!
    but i love your confidence
    and imagery

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  • Savita TyagiSavita Tyagi (12/1/2015 2:07:00 PM)

    If I gave my eyes to some one else would they see the same as I saw.......great heart felt lines. I can't say any thing just about the eyes but would like to add that they have to have your heart too to feel what you feel.You have uncanny ability to be descriptive in a tender marvelous way. Read your couple of other poems too. Enjoyed them all. Excellent pieces of writing. Best wishes for you and also many thanks for visiting my page and leaving lovely comments.

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  • Mj Lemon (10/12/2015 3:18:00 PM)

    About a goddess...on earth. This is great writing.

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  • Ramesh RaiRamesh Rai (6/21/2015 4:13:00 PM)

    Realised the beauty of words and your composition.

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  • Bharati NayakBharati Nayak (6/20/2015 1:02:00 PM)

    A beautiful picture of the muse, the poem is like music.What beauty the poet sees in his beloved! He wonders - - - if I gave my.eyes to some one else
    Would they see the same as I saw

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  • Edward Kofi LouisEdward Kofi Louis (6/19/2015 6:38:00 AM)

    I watched her walked away. Nice work with the muse of love and life.

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  • Dave Walker (3/9/2015 12:20:00 PM)

    A really beautiful poem, love the ending. A wonderful write.

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  • Godfrey MorrisGodfrey Morris (2/27/2015 6:11:00 PM)

    Beautiful story in a poem. Great write

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