I watched her walk away,
Her lanky arms swung in the wind,
Her jacket softly brushed against itself,
Painted a soft dull green,
Her hair hid under her knitted woven hat,
Showing the lower lobe of her ears,
Where her earrings matched her bright white smile,
A joyous occusion,
To see her smile,
Her eyes peeked through the clear lens of her thick black glasses,
I can't help but think,
Anything else would be an understatement,
Would I think the same thing,
Through someone else's eyes,
Such music,
The way her voice vocalized,
The indentions left in her cheeks,
Her skin wore a radiant brown,
Beautiful in color,
Her blush shown red as her cheeks could go no higher,
Her smile stretched comfortably across her face,
Leaving more to the imagination,
If I gave my eyes to someone else,
Would they see the same as I saw,
No longer blind as I felt I could be myself,
No longer a pebble in the sea of her eye
A beautiful picture of the muse, the poem is like music.What beauty the poet sees in his beloved! He wonders - - - if I gave my.eyes to some one else Would they see the same as I saw
If I gave my eyes to someone else, Would they see the same as I saw, No longer blind as I felt I could be myself, No longer a pebble in the sea of her eye.. expressions of love.. you are very original in your wiritng and presentation.. thank yu dear poet. tony
Those eyes scanning a face follow a unique line. If that line could be faithfully transcribed, then a map reader could follow it, and it would delineate a territory of loving philosophy. Yes, I think we could look thru another's eyes, glancing from detail to detail. But if there were just a pebble's single view, there would be nothing to sweep us along.
Loaded with a love that is lovely! Well done!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
If I gave my eyes to some one else would they see the same as I saw.......great heart felt lines. I can't say any thing just about the eyes but would like to add that they have to have your heart too to feel what you feel.You have uncanny ability to be descriptive in a tender marvelous way. Read your couple of other poems too. Enjoyed them all. Excellent pieces of writing. Best wishes for you and also many thanks for visiting my page and leaving lovely comments.