(Dedicated to neat poet Catrina Heart)
1. Summer dragon runs
Upon the plant and animal
Motionless Nature
2. Summer cloud flies
Dream bud wake up sluggishly
Jovial love letter
3. Cloud upon trees
Moving worship around
Love sprouts slowly
4. Summer summer-love
Rain love goes down leisurely
Sleepy grass laughing
lovely images of summer, clouds and rain. you have built it beautifully.10 Mamta
Summer love Rain drop Sleepy grass its really a very impressive and meaningful haiko..wonderful...lovely and really heart touching one...respect your words as comments..hope we be in touched sharing words... thanks...yours
dear friend, though your poems thematically seem very interesting, I would choose not to call them 'haikus' as they do not follow the traditional and stereotypical pattern in their number of syllables and the necessary inclusion of a colour choice in each. I am sorry for my negation, but I feel I must be strict if you want my sincere help
all but lovely summer haiku.. sweet... beautiful summer built beautifully love dwells in every lines.. 10+++ _maia_
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I believe you captured in a lovely way the essence of the art of haiku in this series :) and I'm sure that Catrina would agree with me on this matter :)