Sun Poem by merna ibrahim

Sun

Rating: 5.0


You are the source of heat and light.
During the morning, the girl flies her kite,
And the flowers sway with delight.
You ignite the whole universe..Yes it's right.

You are the center of our solar system.
You revolve around your axis in a specific system.
Your temperature is so high,
If anyone came nearer to you, he certainly would say to his life Goodbye! !

You are a double edged weapon;
Your heat and light would destroy us,
And also rescue us from the freeze's cuss.
You are a powerful star
And you are from us so far.

You appear with every new dawn
And you give the day a beautiful tone.
You are important to the human, the animal and the plant,
Without you we can't live, Yes we can't! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
p.a. noushad 01 June 2009

merna, very meaningful poem, i like your style of writing.

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a wonderful poem merna.sweet and meaningful.well done..10++++

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Reshma Ramesh 31 May 2009

well done dear.....keep up the good work and the sun will keep shining

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 30 May 2009

Wow................beautiful rhymes..........Indeed without sun there is no fun..........keep writing...................

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 30 May 2009

Your parents are the sun that shine on you, givin you life, to live.

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Leela Devi 25 November 2010

-you are from us so far-very sensitive line -dear sister poet

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Obinna Eruchie 28 October 2009

With light from the sun, nature's beauty can be viewed at sight.

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Ramin Chaman 30 September 2009

Many thanks for your vote. And I think your poem deseves 10+++

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Blazing with beauty. Keep on growing!

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Menna Gamal 01 June 2009

so sweet and lovely poem, you are right the sun is so beautiful and important.well done and keep writing

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