In the pre-dawn darkness the herdsman awoke.
On the trees outside woodpigeons and magpies
Fluffed up their feathers and crows shifted on their perch.
The shower was hot and steam filled the bathroom
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A living, breathing, pulsating, alive and animating description of the sunrise! ! !
Sunrise is the imagery of desire and here you full filled all thank you
It's described so vividly that mind can form a clear picture of the beautiful scene.
A fine poem, with gradually building stanzas with repetition incrementally changing until the process of your well described sunrise is eloquently done.
A great poem, I live across the road from a farm so I see a lot of mother nature on the early mornings. Sometimes you forget it's there, It's poems like this that remind us of what there is to see. A great write.
Beautiful description of early morn's sights and sounds! Enjoyed much!
Profound poetry describing mother nature... I liked the imaginary!
Hi Dave, Wonderful observation and description of the dawn. The trees, birds, sun, herdsman, cows milking in the parlor beautiful observation of activities including 'the only sound came from their hooves and the Swishing of their tails striking their back bone'
lovely imagery of beautiful birds, animals and other creatures living on the earth! ...
Fluffed up their feathers and crows shifted on their perch Soon an orchestra of birdsong filled the air Horizon the pink glow had turned into a faint orange faint shadows of trees as darkness was replaced by light Beautiful scenery began to unravel. The orchestra started playing. Poets observations are magnificent. Thank you.
beautiful feeling felt in heart after reading your poem and a picture is formed with stunning imagery...love it ten marks..aw
A beautiful portrait of English countyside Congrats on it