Saturday, October 19, 2013

Sunrise Comments

Rating: 4.5

In the pre-dawn darkness the herdsman awoke.
On the trees outside woodpigeons and magpies
Fluffed up their feathers and crows shifted on their perch.
The shower was hot and steam filled the bathroom
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David Wood
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LeeAnn Azzopardi 12 February 2023

A beautiful portrait of English countyside Congrats on it

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Anjandev Roy 11 February 2023

An elegant and impeccable piece.....thank u, dear poet....

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Shahzia Batool 09 December 2013

A living, breathing, pulsating, alive and animating description of the sunrise! ! !

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 03 November 2013

Sunrise is the imagery of desire and here you full filled all thank you

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Lyn Paul 26 October 2013

You have covered everything in this amazing sunrise. Beautiful

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Yasmin Khan 24 October 2013

It's described so vividly that mind can form a clear picture of the beautiful scene.

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Danny Draper 22 October 2013

A fine poem, with gradually building stanzas with repetition incrementally changing until the process of your well described sunrise is eloquently done.

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Dave Walker 22 October 2013

A great poem, I live across the road from a farm so I see a lot of mother nature on the early mornings. Sometimes you forget it's there, It's poems like this that remind us of what there is to see. A great write.

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Valsa George 21 October 2013

Beautiful description of early morn's sights and sounds! Enjoyed much!

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Marvin Brato 21 October 2013

Profound poetry describing mother nature... I liked the imaginary!

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Neela Nath Das 20 October 2013

Great imagery.So vivid.Picturesque!

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Kanniappan Kanniappan 20 October 2013

Hi Dave, Wonderful observation and description of the dawn. The trees, birds, sun, herdsman, cows milking in the parlor beautiful observation of activities including 'the only sound came from their hooves and the Swishing of their tails striking their back bone'

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Queeny Gona 20 October 2013

lovely imagery of beautiful birds, animals and other creatures living on the earth! ...

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Heather Wilkins 19 October 2013

a beautiful sunrise. great imagery

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 19 October 2013

Fluffed up their feathers and crows shifted on their perch Soon an orchestra of birdsong filled the air Horizon the pink glow had turned into a faint orange faint shadows of trees as darkness was replaced by light Beautiful scenery began to unravel. The orchestra started playing. Poets observations are magnificent. Thank you.

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Wahab Abdul 19 October 2013

beautiful feeling felt in heart after reading your poem and a picture is formed with stunning imagery...love it ten marks..aw

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