adheez van der beanthz

Rookie - 42 Points (27 May 1980)

Symphony Of Agony - Poem by adheez van der beanthz

lungs taken by force
breath screamed without voice
heartbeat weaken increasingly
crystallized in the blood that flee

memories haunting
realities repeating
sealed every choice
killed any risk

black disappear so fast
radiance hold on to the maze
the rest is vacancy
remorse to the death that never be


Comments about Symphony Of Agony by adheez van der beanthz

  • Shania K. Younce (5/25/2014 12:07:00 AM)

    I have a question what's up with the numbers. Although you needn't feel inclined to answer. Very cool poem. Bien! (Report) Reply

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  • (12/9/2013 4:35:00 PM)

    Very vivid. I could hear my heart pounding while I was reading. Fantastic rhyming.10++ (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (7/28/2013 1:30:00 AM)

    black disappear so fast
    radiance hold on to the maze

    Though there is dread of the last breaths, still there is the radiance of hope! Enjoyed!
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  • (7/25/2013 8:46:00 PM)

    A very descriptive and evocative poem about final breaths. (Report) Reply

  • Patricia Grantham (7/25/2013 9:23:00 AM)

    Yes I believe that dying can be an agonizing experience for some and not
    any for others. It is related to how we choose to live our life and especially our
    last days and how God decides to show us his mercy.
    A truly inspiring write.
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  • Ramesh T A (7/25/2013 3:19:00 AM)

    Agony before death is wonderfully depicted by this poem! Keep it up by improvements further! (Report) Reply

  • Kevin Patrick (6/16/2013 3:15:00 PM)

    I do not fully understand the meaning of this, but it seems to be about a near death experience or on the threshold of death, the first stanza seems to talk about what is happening, the second is the feeling of what is happening and the third is you looking at the person dying. Great description full of dread and great twists of words. Lovely job! (Report) Reply

  • (6/14/2013 5:35:00 PM)

    Very strong poem. Amazing words and lines. Vera Sidhwa (Report) Reply

  • Rajendran Muthiah (6/13/2013 1:09:00 AM)

    There is no remorse to death. Agony repeats. (Report) Reply

  • Nasarudheen Parameswaran (6/12/2013 10:08:00 PM)

    A good sensitive poem. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, June 12, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, June 14, 2013

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