The Humming Hope In Time Poem by adheez van der beanthz

Plea for love is indeed no crime in life! Heaven on Earth lies in love only! Nice poem, my friend!

Adheez, you have asked me to do something with the title. I think the content is really fine. But if I were to give the title, I would call it- The Humming Hope in Time. Thanks for sharing and asking for response. Take care and keep on posting.

The poem delivered from your heart, we felt it that way, now i am sorry for being late, this already have a new title and it is great one..but i hope you try to make brighter poem that tell what your courage in you..let it be out and you will find it will be a stronger side of you...and i would call it as The return of my reflection...well if you ever write it that will be the name hahahahaha.._SOul

I think we have a misunderstanding here, especially for elizabeth and soul in this poem, I did not ask for the title but of course I appreciate the feedback that has been given and I liked the title proposed by elizabeth As for the title of the poem to demand that I send it to a poem which is now titled just an ordinary bridge for extraordinary dreams once again I thank you for your input

Beautifully expressed of such strong emotions that without your lover heaven has even lost its brand!

Even just a glimmer of hope can really turn things around especially When it comes to love and passion. Love can be so deep sometimes it causes us to lose all sense of levity. Then we begin to ask the question how can something that feels so good cause so many problems? A nice write, keep on penning.

A very good poem, If this feeling is sin let the Hell wins These are great lines indeed, a passionate theme and a smooth rhythm, welldone,

True feelings simply stated. A lovely poem

very nice indeed......

Feelings and thoughts simply stated always has the desired effect, nicely written.