Talking, talking to my ego
Tired I fell asleep
Waking up I saw a face grim
Within me- no friendship!
What has gone wrong?
Oh! This petty!
Forgot, I do admit,
To bid bye as I went to sleep
No tantrums please over it!
12th December 2009
ah, the Ego, they can be so tiresome! and needy! but we can't get rid of them...or can we?
Ego is a monster that eats the rational thinking of a person which also destroys relationship etc.......to avoid we must learn how to be humble and have a long strand of patience....nice one! ! !
Sisnce you told no tantrums over it... the ego.. very beautiful poem regards sandhya
Ur pure heart remove the ego...glad the ego only stay for a while...after u woke up u feel somethg missing and hope to change, mean here your heart did not conquered by dark vanity, purity take place...and for me, if u think u dont have any friendship i always with u, be a friend is to accept the friend as they are and try to give a opinion to them to become better and better, it is always better to live in bitter but truth than sweet with lies...i know this is only a poem but it very good dish for us! lol hahahahha
Ingenious, beautiful, well penned. Thanks for sharing. Happy new year.
So how do we conquer this thing? ? Thats what ur poem makes me think! :)
Clever poem Kesav, just shows how our tricky ego does everything, to be the centre of attention. Bob
Your poem is very much meaningful and you written with great interest and concerns. This way you explain how you talking to your ego level and at the same times you tried and pacify it is beautiful in writing. An attempt at writing good what you think.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Cute concept of a thought that is imaginative and intuitive and holds well...s no tantrums..........mandara