Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Rookie - 284 Points (June 5th / Kerala- India)

Talking Talking To My Ego… - Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Talking, talking to my ego
Tired I fell asleep
Waking up I saw a face grim
Within me; no friendship!

What has gone wrong? Oh! This petty!
Forgot, I do admit,
To bid bye as I went to sleep;
No tantrums please over it!

12th December 2009


Comments about Talking Talking To My Ego… by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

  • Unwritten Soul (7/30/2010 10:50:00 PM)


    Ur pure heart remove the ego...glad the ego only stay for a while...after u woke up u feel somethg missing and hope to change, mean here your heart did not conquered by dark vanity, purity take place...and for me, if u think u dont have any friendship i always with u, be a friend is to accept the friend as they are and try to give a opinion to them to become better and better, it is always better to live in bitter but truth than sweet with lies...i know this is only a poem but it very good dish for us! lol hahahahha (Report) Reply

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  • (12/24/2009 1:39:00 PM)


    Ingenious, beautiful, well penned. Thanks for sharing. Happy new year. (Report) Reply

  • (12/21/2009 9:49:00 AM)


    So how do we conquer this thing? ? Thats what ur poem makes me think! :) (Report) Reply

  • (12/19/2009 8:07:00 AM)


    Clever poem Kesav, just shows how our tricky ego does everything, to be the centre of attention. Bob (Report) Reply

  • (12/16/2009 7:43:00 PM)


    Your poem is very much meaningful and you written with great interest and concerns. This way you explain how you talking to your ego level and at the same times you tried and pacify it is beautiful in writing. An attempt at writing good what you think. (Report) Reply

  • Indira Renganathan (12/16/2009 7:13:00 AM)


    Original words in your original style without 'ego'....a humble poem (Report) Reply

  • (12/16/2009 12:35:00 AM)


    hehe!
    absolutely witty.
    it shows how two-edged sword our ego is.
    wonderful.
    loved it.
    thank you sir.
    'In the vanity of my empty froth,
    I forget the substance I am.
    And in the ego of my own little self...
    I forget the universe I am.'
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  • (12/15/2009 9:01:00 PM)


    ego..does it not have anything positive in it...a wonderful and thought provoking poem...your style and craftmanship shines sir...into my favs (Report) Reply

  • (12/15/2009 4:33:00 AM)


    You better be careful next time, why hurt that sensitive giant friend, a great message Kesav and ten for that! (Report) Reply

  • (12/14/2009 4:08:00 AM)


    you went off to sleep with a difficult companion. nowonder you didn't wake up fresh.
    a very deep message here given by using humour.
    ego is foreaver interfering with our perception of ourselves and others. We are ready to jump at any trivial slight. its so difficult to live with pompous people and their tantrums.you hold a mirroir to your readers.10

    thanks

    loved it Mamta
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  • (12/14/2009 1:08:00 AM)


    hahaha! loved this one........... (Report) Reply

  • (12/13/2009 11:19:00 PM)


    Sisnce you told
    no tantrums over it... the ego..
    very beautiful poem
    regards
    sandhya
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  • (12/13/2009 5:59:00 PM)


    Ego is a monster that eats the rational thinking of a person which also destroys relationship etc.......to avoid we must learn how to be humble and have a long strand of patience....nice one! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • (12/13/2009 12:22:00 PM)


    ah, the Ego, they can be so tiresome! and needy! but we can't get rid of them...or can we? (Report) Reply

  • (12/12/2009 8:28:00 AM)


    Cute concept of a thought that is imaginative and intuitive and holds well...s no tantrums..........mandara (Report) Reply

  • (12/12/2009 7:10:00 AM)


    'I saw a face grim within me' - be very patient, talking to your Ego, Kesav.
    A good write.
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  • Maia Padua (12/12/2009 6:54:00 AM)


    great write, Sir....flows with great meaning
    food for thoughts...very realistic...
    Ego is one of the hindrances why we can't accept mistakes right away..accept defeat..
    best enemy of a man....Ego.....
    but since one know how to talk with his ego...means his ego cant dominate him...
    fight with ego and let the soft spot of our heart/mind overule
    thanks for this write, Sir....makes me ponder...
    10++++


    Lovelots,

    Maia
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  • (12/12/2009 3:26:00 AM)


    Don't care much about this Miss Ego, she always revolves around herself and too sensitive, thus came the expression 'Ego-centric'
    Thanks for this lovely write, meaningful like always! 100
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  • Sadiqullah Khan (12/12/2009 2:54:00 AM)


    That better needs to be left alone, for a sound sleep. Good gesture.10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, December 12, 2009

Poem Edited: Monday, January 11, 2010


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