Tanka ~ Memory. Poem by Dr. M. Asim Nehal

Tanka ~ Memory.

Rating: 5.0


buzzing honeybees
dancing flowers in chill breeze
a hummingbird sings
touchy melancholy song
past revived in memory.

Monday, August 16, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: nature love,memories
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Jack 16 August 2021

How wonderfully corelated the honeybees with memory. Great work.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 16 August 2021

Lovely scenes that could induce the mind to look back at one's life of yesteryears. Beautifully crafted Tanka.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 16 August 2021

A loveliest Tanka about Memory. Brilliantly put! 5 Stars full, Mr. Asim Sir!

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 16 August 2021

Memory is a precious gift from God. I can't imagine life without it. A beautiful poem! 5 stars.

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Rebecca Navarre 21 August 2021

Oh, How beautiful and heart touching! .. Such beautiful sentiments! .. Awesome! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++

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Sandra Feldman 18 August 2021

Beautiful revival, that we can see and feel. Excellent! Full Sphere.

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S H 18 August 2021

Past is always fascinating when compared to present/

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 17 August 2021

Melancholic songs revives memory! Beautiful Tanka, Asim ji.....Stars galore

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 17 August 2021

Certain scenes of nature takes you back into the past years

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