Tear Poem by Asif Baloch

Tear

Rating: 5.0


in few lines
truth is defined
truth of love
feelings and mind
truth of a drop
dropped from an eye
fell on earthly bed
and rose with salty tides

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 23 November 2008

It often takes tears to create a work of art that is memorable. Lovely write. Warm regards, Sandra

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Seema Chowdhury 22 November 2008

nice and lovely. it is one of my favourite subjects.

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Ben Gieske 22 November 2008

Truth can be found in many things as you avow. Your last lines leave a lot to think about, which is the kind of poem that is more intriguing to read.

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Asif Andalib 22 November 2008

I totally agree with you. We truly understand how much we love when we lose or miss our lover a lot. If poems were flowers, this one would definitely be a red rose.10/10.

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Naru Kaede 22 November 2008

Wow, cool description! Feeling when we dropp tears, , I love it!

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Kite Remedy 04 December 2008

Short but specific.. Tear is, , , yeah, tear.. Beautiful..

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 04 December 2008

A few lines are all that is needed, if the reader needs it... Andrew 10

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*Trusting You* 27 November 2008

fell on earthly bed and rose with salty tides great lines. this poem gives the reader such a clear image and we have all cried this is writen with a pen of a poet... good job. Becca

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<font color =fusha>Amy 26 November 2008

Fantastic few lines :) great poem

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Dr Kamran Haider 24 November 2008

Wah Asif Bhai... Wah... Simply beautiful... I totally agree with Sandra... Really a memorable work of art and it never comes without tears in your eyes... Beautiful indeed...

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