The Abandoned House Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

The Abandoned House

Rating: 4.6


The abandoned house
Devoid of windows and roof
Posts like wonky teeth
But I can still remember
The kindness of the owner.


Copyright 2020, Rose Marie Juan- Austin, All Rights Reserved

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 22 April 2020

Kindness in the midst of trouble comforts our hearts and minds......10++++

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Anjandev Roy 19 April 2020

The kindness of the owner......remarkable write......thank u. anjandev roy.

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Aniruddha Pathak 20 April 2020

The contrast is beautifully brought out in a short piece, lovely write.

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Akhtar Jawad 20 April 2020

No doubt in it, the world, today, looks like an abandoned house but the owner of this house, I hope, shall forgive us for our sins. Soon the world will be repaired. A nice metaphor.

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Anil Kumar Panda 21 April 2020

A thought provoking write. His heart is always full of love for all. Thanks for sharing such a sweet poem.

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Nabakishore Dash 24 June 2022

Kindness does not require any thing valuable. Very superb write Madam Marie.

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Mahtab Bangalee 09 November 2020

The abandoned house Devoid of windows and roof Posts like wonky teeth But I can still remember The kindness of the owner.///great; introspective expression on the heart or soul living

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Shaun Cronick 24 July 2020

Good and cherished memories are indeed eternal and so priceless Rose Marie. A fine and beautiful memory poem for one and all. 10+ and take care and the loved ones around you.

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Though the reason leading to the present condition of the house is not clear it can be interpreted that the inmates are deceased or are displaced. It's a matter of relief or empathy to remember the kindness of the owner.. beautiful versification...

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Valsa George 27 April 2020

It is not the house or its opulence that stands in our mind, but the people who occupy it! Even if it is a mud hovel, if the people living inside are kind and loving, definitely that house will leave a lasting impression in us! Succinct, but beautiful and sweet!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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