The abandoned house
Devoid of windows and roof
Posts like wonky teeth
But I can still remember
The kindness of the owner.
Copyright 2020, Rose Marie Juan- Austin, All Rights Reserved
A thought provoking write. His heart is always full of love for all. Thanks for sharing such a sweet poem.
No doubt in it, the world, today, looks like an abandoned house but the owner of this house, I hope, shall forgive us for our sins. Soon the world will be repaired. A nice metaphor.
The contrast is beautifully brought out in a short piece, lovely write.
The kindness of the owner......remarkable write......thank u. anjandev roy.
Many poets have poems about—and a sense of longing for—their old homes, yet each expresses this in their own unique way and distinct voice.
The abandoned house serves as a space within one's memory; even if it has collapsed in reality, it remains vibrant within the imagination—we grew up there, and it has held onto our memories.
Kindness does not require any thing valuable. Very superb write Madam Marie.
The abandoned house Devoid of windows and roof Posts like wonky teeth But I can still remember The kindness of the owner.///great; introspective expression on the heart or soul living
Good and cherished memories are indeed eternal and so priceless Rose Marie. A fine and beautiful memory poem for one and all. 10+ and take care and the loved ones around you.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Kindness in the midst of trouble comforts our hearts and minds......10++++