The abandoned house
Devoid of windows and roof
Posts like wonky teeth
But I can still remember
The kindness of the owner.
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The kindness of the owner......remarkable write......thank u. anjandev roy.
The contrast is beautifully brought out in a short piece, lovely write.
No doubt in it, the world, today, looks like an abandoned house but the owner of this house, I hope, shall forgive us for our sins. Soon the world will be repaired. A nice metaphor.
A thought provoking write. His heart is always full of love for all. Thanks for sharing such a sweet poem.
Kindness does not require any thing valuable. Very superb write Madam Marie.
The abandoned house Devoid of windows and roof Posts like wonky teeth But I can still remember The kindness of the owner.///great; introspective expression on the heart or soul living
Good and cherished memories are indeed eternal and so priceless Rose Marie. A fine and beautiful memory poem for one and all. 10+ and take care and the loved ones around you.
Though the reason leading to the present condition of the house is not clear it can be interpreted that the inmates are deceased or are displaced. It's a matter of relief or empathy to remember the kindness of the owner.. beautiful versification...
It is not the house or its opulence that stands in our mind, but the people who occupy it! Even if it is a mud hovel, if the people living inside are kind and loving, definitely that house will leave a lasting impression in us! Succinct, but beautiful and sweet!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Kindness in the midst of trouble comforts our hearts and minds......10++++